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Open Poetry #10

make it hurt

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2000-09-26 12:39 PM

hurt me heal me love me hold me
don't toy with me don't destroy me
make it real

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2000-09-26 12:50 PM

bsquirrel-
wow...this one says it all in so few
words. i like...alot.

-vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2000-09-26 12:02 PM

bsquirrel...

Making it real may hurt
but it makes us feel!

You captured the feel.
I enjoyed

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

3 posted 2000-09-26 02:24 PM

Wonderful!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2000-09-27 01:29 AM

Thanks to all three of you. I wanted to keep this one simple.

Mike

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