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They Are Gone
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They Are Gone |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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They Are Gone it has been said he left, as did she and they might have taken a slight sabbatical for a little while but they left their soft smiles I know because I've been to the archives which can, in itself, this word "archive" be a lovely word or a dank word depending on what is in its hold and what it is holding but these archives are delicious and nutritious and sustaining of all that I seek their smiles…and everything else they left behind so do not chide me nor deride me for the time I spend in here, letting it all sink in again and again their words of passion of heartbreak and surcease, of love and light of misery and hope of misguided thoughts and wars well won and wars duly lost of spirits and spiritual love of planes and substances untouchable but all of which are left readable their words sustain my soul and the tiniest, most miniscule thoughts were planted in my brain because of their words which someone did not leave unheard but rather, read and enjoyed, even if only by One… that One person captured a piece of the writer, the poet, the author that One person went away or stayed because of that writer, poet, author and forevermore shall remember or if not actually remember, still, will have been touched, just once by the Passion of the Person, Poet, Painter of Promise. so on this very holy day a day of rest a morning come early with soft electrical candle's light and if fortunate, then on into the night I shall visit and reacquaint myself with friends who are on sabbatical, but visit them I shall in the archives. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh my Karilea, You have written beautifully of the very soul of the wonderment and hearts that are, and have been here....Your pen is overflowing this crisp Sunday morn. Bonnie |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karilea, what a great idea, what a great poem. Be well Kethry. Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What a great idea... One of my personal favorites is Wolfgang. I sure do wish he'd find his way back here...  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
because I've been to the archives which can, in itself, this word "archive" be a lovely word or a dank word depending on what is in its hold Karilea, a beautifully written piece. excellently crafted. wow... one for my library. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
soft laugh...y'all are up way too early... Bonnie, yes, my pen's ink is flowing rivers...as has yours... Kethry, enjoy! Nan...me too...d'ya suppose if he gets beeps from archival reads, he'll make a comeback?... brian, any time I see your name, I know my day is complete...and to be added to your library? a soft, thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, snap love, I've just come out from there actually. (sorry, sneezing from all the dust!) This is beautiful, and so are those achives. Loud and boisterous cheers from me, well as loud as I can manage at the moment. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, my friend, rest those vocals...the clapping will sustain me...{~,^}...be well... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What a beautiful thought to visit the archives and bring back some great poetry to our hearts once again. This is so well written from the heart Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
because I've been to the archives which can, in itself, this word "archive" be a lovely word or a dank word depending on what is in its hold and what it is holding but these archives are delicious and nutritious and sustaining of all that I seek their smiles…and everything else they left behind ==================== yes...exactly ... when I first came here I was having some of the worst insomnia ...many a long night was spent by candle light..in the back pages reading all the words of grace engraved in time... you have captured their gift perfectly and the way it feels to make the discoveries. very cool poem Sun, very cool indeed. later-see ya in the archives-gator jm |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
What a lovely thought and what a lovely piece you've written, as usual!!! Something to keep in mind to sustain oneself when in that oh so reflective mood  Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ They are not gone for they remain in the archival attic of remember. As you know, I visit there often ... on a mission or just a passion to read, read, read. There are jewels in the archive chests. Let's have a treasure hunt ! (No... not one of those brain-bogglers) Just take a tour from time to time to find a jewel and make it shine with the glow of knowing it touched us. Really nice and caring write, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth, if I ever stop writing from the heart, let me know... JM, you're OUT! Thanks for coming in to read, little one... Peppermint - reflections are excellent... Marge, I will ALWAYS go on treasure hunts with you...or FOR you...{~,~}... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
One of my favorite places to visit. . . I know that I found the sun there myself. . .  I would say that if you haven't been to the archives, that you go. . . and see what has been done here. . . *sigh*. . . I really do miss some of those people. . . Wonderful write Karilea. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, I agree with your first thoughts, and I thank you for your last thought... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karilea. what a wonderful topic for a poem! Yes, the archives are wonderful places. That's one of the beauties of being a writer...as long as your words exist...you exist. We are as close to immortal as humans can get....and we never really go away. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And just think, our 'Deer, we may all live on in cyberspace forever [which is why I try to be SO careful of what I write...] LOL... thank you my friend, for peeking in... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a beautiful way to bring to light what we sometimes seem to forget about. This is not only one of your best but it is also a darn great idea for this wonderful day...Thank you for that and this lovely penning from you. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Then have a most delightful read, Mark, and thank you for sharing your thoughts... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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