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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-10-28 02:02 PM




Four Seasons Of Love


I love you in the winters icy cold
As snow drifts softly from on high
Smiling, my hand you tenderly hold
Warming my spirit, you're the sun in my sky

*      *      *

I love you in the fresh new spring
As daffodils nod their golden heads
Oh my! You smile, my heart goes zing
We play at love among the flower beds

*      *      *

I love you in the summers hot sun
As children race along the beach
Laughing we share our love, our fun
A haven for lovers we will soon reach

*      *      *

I love you in the autumns smoky mist
As the trees turn their different hue
Your touch, your loving special kiss
What else is there, except this I love you

Marsha



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

© Copyright 2000 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-10-28 02:07 PM


...and I love this poem! Lovely, Marsha!  

Denise

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2 posted 2000-10-28 02:08 PM


What else could there be to beat such love.
This is a lovely poem Marsha.

Thanks
Jon



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Marsha~ (Mushy) This is so lovely....
my favorite:

"I love you in the autumns smoky mist
As the trees turn their different hue
Your touch, your loving special kiss
What else is there, except this I love you"

fantastic!   -SEA

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4 posted 2000-10-28 02:41 PM


..good writing and enjoyed     Marcy
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5 posted 2000-10-28 03:46 PM


Denise, thank you, truly I thank you
              
Jon, Mmmm, oh yes, I'm very lucky, and I know just how rare this is. Thank you, I'm glad that this little poem gave you a smile.
                
SEA, Oh love thank you, actually that's my favourite verse too.
Take care
            Mushy, whoops I meant Marsha
                             
Marcy, very like my sister love, now you are sure you're not. It would be just like her to haunt me. Besides it would explain whom the grass was, and how they knew all about the poem! Oh my poor ears, I shall be doing pennance for ever.  
Take care
                   Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2000-10-28 04:13 PM


I love your poetry every season of the year.
Fall is here, so keep them coming
Liz

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7 posted 2000-10-28 04:23 PM


Wonderful portrayal of timeless love throughout the seasons Marsha. Beautifully written, with a lovely flow ... much enjoyed this delicate rendering!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2000-10-28 04:28 PM


~~~ Marsha ~~~
Your lovely poems bring joy to my heart all year round!!


Follow your dream!


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9 posted 2000-10-28 05:58 PM


Elizabeth, you are very kind to me, and I really don't deserve that you should be. I just enjoy writing it, and being amonst all my favourite family members is a blessing in itself.
                
Kit, you are always so sweet to me, and I thank you, because although I know I don't deserve such friends, you all are anyway.
Take care, and Kit, if you ever need an ear give me a yell. With all the sisters I have a few more would be welcome. Besides have you met my sisters! All as loud as me, and I'm the quiet one. (Actually we all say that, good honest family tradition, blame the others!)
Take care Kit      

Hi lil sis, you are an angel, a real poppet. Take care love, Oh and I've asked Francessca to give me the lowdown on what you can expect, over the next few months. Thought it might help)
Take care love, I'll speak to you as soon as I get some voice back
            Marsha
                  
        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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10 posted 2000-10-28 06:10 PM


Well, I would definitely say that you have got the whole year covered quite well and quite warmly at that.  Excellent write my president.  Loved it.
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Mark my dear kind friend, I thank you, warmly? Mmmmm well you know how I like heat! It's living in a cold, damp, flooded place you know, I begin to yearn for some warmth. Glad you like this one. Now would that be a dignified enough response from your president, I know, well ish!
Take care
              President Mushy Marsha
                          


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2000-10-30 05:37 AM


Liked the content, the ideas and the Love...James
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13 posted 2000-10-30 06:18 AM


Very nicely done,  a poem to reread each season of love. *s

~Wynter


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...Pope John Paul II


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James, I glad you like this, it must be my season of love.
Take care  

Wynter, thank you for reading and I'm glad you like it. By the way welcome to Passions you'll like it here.
Take care
                 Marsha
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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15 posted 2000-10-30 09:23 AM


Mushy~ this is so pretty, I just wanted to bring it back up and read it again.   -SEA
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16 posted 2000-10-30 09:37 AM


SEA, well love you know me and pretty, actually I like this one, and you know me and my own scribbles. Thank you love I appreciate it, you know I do.
Takecare
                  Mushy
                        
I was thinking you know I've got so many names, it's like a role call just to call me!
I'll give you the list and you are at liberty to choose your favourite. The first four are my real names and then the nicknames start okay here we go
Marsha
Beverley
Melody
Grace
Bubbles
Mushy
Marshmellow
Bebee
Em
Messy Marsha
Bev
and by no means least the one that my sisters call me
Choas
And please don't choose Beverley I really hate it.
Take care
                Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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17 posted 2000-10-31 04:34 AM


Em, er Messy Marsha, You kept this poem beautifully neat and is well written also. i like the sentiment expressed.
be well
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
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Marsha
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18 posted 2000-10-31 06:56 AM


kethry, thank you, glad you like this one. You know what sisters are like, it was my habbit of leaving stuff everywhere that led to that particular nickname.
Take care
               Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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19 posted 2000-10-31 09:31 AM


Ah, love, sweet love. It seems you have found a true one and for that I am happy for you. Lovely poem. Tessa
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20 posted 2000-10-31 09:48 AM


Marsha~ you will always be Mushy to me for your sweet soft fluffy heart and your beautiful words that come from it........... -SEA
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21 posted 2000-10-31 11:56 AM


Tessa, I have, and I am very happy. Thank you I do appreciate the time you have taken to reply, I truly do.

SEA, so be it, Mushy!    
Soft hearted, well bless you love, just don't be too nice to those porters, they don't deserve it! Oh and they are still arguing over what to call themselves. David said they did think of OSCAR, which stands for, Our SEA is Creative and Always Responds. But I think they've decided to hold one of their rowdy meetings tonight to definitely decide. I promise that they won't come up with anything really vulgar.

Now how am I ever to keep order now they know my nickname I don't know! (I'll have to beat them all regularly)
                   
Take care
             Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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