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0 posted 2000-10-28 09:14 AM

She waited with anticipation
What would her job be today?
What little task would be given her,
Before she could go out and play?
Dressed in soft pink corduroy,
With little Keds on her feet,
Her wings she knew would help her,
Face any challenge she'd meet.
She heard her name and listened
As her chore for the day was read,
And her halo glistened brightly,
As it rested atop her head.
Oh my it was her turn for dusting,
Scattering sparkles from stars around,
She could hardly contain her excitment,
As she giggled her sweet angel sound.
Adjusting her dainty little wings,
She flew off with bucket in hand,
Landing softly on a cloud,
Gathering up the twinkling sand.
And when her pail could hold no more,
She sat and rested awhile,
Feeling so lucky to have this chore,
She beamed a sweet angel smile.
Soon she stood and got ready,
To spread her wings in flight,
Heading off to the crescent moon,
To finish her job this night.
Sitting on the very edge,
She lifted her bucket high,
Tipping it slowly upside down,
She watched the bright crystals fly.
Tired from all this heavenly work,
She cuddled up in the curve of the moon,
Dreaming sweet little cherub dreams,
Hoping she'd have this job again soon.

Marge Tindal

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1 posted 2000-10-28 09:36 AM

Bonnie~
What precious images you capture in your thoughts.

'She cuddled up in the curve of the moon,
Dreaming sweet little cherub dreams,
Hoping she'd have this job again soon.'

Awwwwwwwww !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2000-10-28 09:38 AM

I never thought about what angels dream about! This is a sweet poem and I love these lines.

She cuddled up in the curve of the moon,
Dreaming sweet little cherub dreams,

Denise

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3 posted 2000-10-28 11:20 AM

This is precious, Bonnie and brought a smile to my heart!

Denise

Victoria

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4 posted 2000-10-28 11:40 AM

you write the sweetest poems Bonnie..this was just lovely..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Ron K. Fox
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5 posted 2000-10-28 12:15 PM

This is something that should be in a childrens book and read every night at bed time...wonderful.

Alle'cram
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6 posted 2000-10-28 12:30 PM

Hi Bonnie, This is precious and I can surely envision the little angel on a quarter moon dangling her little feet. Beautiful. Marcy

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7 posted 2000-10-28 05:27 PM

Thanks Marge, the wee one was just soooo tired!!!
Hi PS - Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed.
Denise - So glad it brought a smile.

Victoria - Thanks so much, I appreciate it.
Ron - Wow, thanks, now that would be a dream!
Marcy - Glad you liked, I could just picture her too.

Thank you all for your kind replies, they are all very much appreciated. Bonnie

Kit McCallum

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8 posted 2000-10-28 05:32 PM

What an absolutely sweet and darling image you've brought to mind Bonnie ... simply adorable, loved this treasure!

Best wishes,
/Kit

tracie66
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9 posted 2000-10-29 01:13 AM

Always love to read your beautiful angelic poem's...so lovely
Tracie~

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It is the harmony of the universe

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10 posted 2000-10-29 07:36 AM

Kit & Tracie - Thank you both so much, for reading and for your kind replies. Bonnie

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11 posted 2000-10-29 07:40 AM

Ah Bonnie, what lovely angel musings you have with you...I am so glad to be able to share my smiles with you today, as I did throughout your entire poem...

and it is a delightful thought to think of Angels wearings Keds...

this is going into my library...{~,^}

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

2dalimit
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12 posted 2000-10-29 09:58 AM

That was absolutely GREAT.
Melton

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13 posted 2000-10-29 10:05 AM

I can only echo everyone else....and I totally agree with Ron...this would grace a children's book!!!

So absolutely adorable!!!

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

Janet Marie
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14 posted 2000-10-29 10:11 AM

Bonnie,
this is enchanting ... wonderful imagery
I see this being expaneded on... and illustrated as a childrens book...
and make sure those keds get drawn on those angels feet

excellent writing girl!!
take care sweet poet
jm

Elizabeth

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15 posted 2000-10-29 11:48 AM

If your poetry is this darling, just imagine what it would be like if you drew these images! Very sweet!

Elizabeth

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Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth

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