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The Storm ( a repost to fit my mood tonight)
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The Storm ( a repost to fit my mood tonight) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Lightening strikes my heart beats faster then comes rain loud like laughter On my face I feel a slap but it was just a thunder clap A deadly voice calls my name it's only the wind but still the same When the storm is through then I'll be free from the weather of feelings so deep in me. -SEA- |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wouldn't it be nice if a storm can clean up our feelings. I loved the way the storm flowed through the poem. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love storms. Like a clearing of the soul. Beautifully portrayed. Methinks I am due one. Thank you. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Inot2B~ A good storm is always cleansing for my heart.....washing it out....thank you  Serenity~ Oh yes, I've one headed in tomorrow and I can hardly wait.....a day of stormy weather makes me feel alive and excited.....medicine for my soul....thank you -SEA |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Don't know why There's no sun up in the sky Stormy weather Since my gal and I ain't together Keeps raining all the time Life is bare Gloom and misery everywhere Stormy weather Just can't get my poor old self together I'm weary all the time Every time So weary all of the time When she went away The blues walked in and then they met me If she stays away That old rocking chair's bound to get me All I do is pray The lord above will let me Just walk in that sun again Can't go on Everything I had is gone Stormy Weather Since my gal and I ain't together Keeps raining all the time Keeps raining all of the time Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
aww man, I love thunderstorms and we haven't had one in soooo long...lol, anyways this is a great piece of work SEA, I wish that storms could erase feelings.... *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Was feeling this too...seems we are moody together tonight Sea Take care and thank you for the respost...I don't think I saw it the first time but it is excellent! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...I didn't see this the first time...the simplicity of this is most wondrously beautiful...sorry for the mood, but most glad you reposted... and a side to Jamie...you really know ALL the words to this great gem? Good for you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
 So will the brim of a cowboy's hat give you some shelter of what you need? Hope so, and don't forget that standing under a cowboy's hat is like standing under mistletoe at Christmas. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I hope this storm did blow away anything bad.....I love storms and love the way your words painted this one Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, are you okay love, I know you have some trouble and maybe the storm will pass taking it with it. This is a magnificent poem, now why didn't I see this before. If you need me just yell. Sometimes it's a good idea to 'talk' it all through. Warm hugs love Mushy Take care of yourself! Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I hope this storm is passing through. Feel better. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed Sea..i also love storms as long as my pc doesnt go on the blink ha...  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love the way you have woven this one, excellent! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea my friend I missed this the first time thru...but it certainly fit my mood today |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"weather of feelings" loved this phrase "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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