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Look into my soul
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Look into my soul |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Look deeply within my soul Look into the passions blue the opening to my heart See the very best of me so often you have saught Look into the passions I have locked up tight help me open the door So they may live again Look into emptiness and fill it with your love Make me see the real me once again restored. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Beautiful feelings here...they need to be freed...so... here is the key to open heart's door, to free you sweet angel, to free you once more. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it is the most precious view anyone can have "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Look deeply within my soul Look into the passions blue the opening to my heart See the very best of me ============== this is exactly how it feels.. this is a very cool poem Rose... very well written..you have expressed many emotions with depth ... in just a few well chosen words.. perfect poetry take care jm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully expressed longing, Rosebud! Denise |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Thanks Ron, I needed that key and now that I have it many doors become unlocked. Janet Marie, you always know the right words to say Irish Rose, unlocking the heart brings about many wonderful things your right they are precious yet how often we hold them in. Denise, sometimes it's very hard to convey my feelings so I'm glad you could feel them. Your so right it is a longing. |
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