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Captured in this Dream
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Captured in this Dream |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Captured in this dream Somehow everything a gleam Never felt this way I walk slowly through the door Never hesitating Even though I know it's a sin I must give in to the temptation of my weakness, So I walk inside See you waiting I fall in your arms I hear the storms raging but with me in your arms I don't even feel alarmed Caught up in this dream You comfort me and hold me I'm enraptured in your spell I feel possessed by you Though I don't even know you captured in this dream |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Some dreams are worth being captured in and this in one of them...lovely write from you. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Some dreams are so lovely, you hope you never wake!!! Dream on, dream true; a harbinger of things to come??? Let's hope so  Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thanks so much Mark and Peppermint, dreams are a outlet. Sometimes dreams reveal so many things just as poetry awakens the pen dreams awaken the soul. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love poems about dreams!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Some dreams capture us, hold us, and make us smile. Your dream did all of these things....thank you for sharing. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Irish Rose and Gentle Spirit, your so right dreams take you to far away places sometimes make you smile and sometimes make you want to sleep more to capture the true essence of the dream and this is one of those dreams. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseBud~ You know you've dreamed the perfect dream ... when it calls you back to slumber. Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Is it truly a sin to be called by your beckoned love? I think not. So dream on sweet one, be consumed by them, let them live within your soul and they will come true. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
ah to dream a little dream, and to sleep more.. hehe your so right Marge what's a little more slumber going to matter. Ron your right nothing wrong with that at all. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rosebud- ah yes...the perfect dream. so beautiful...i love this. wonderful write. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~A superb piece...Dreams are wonderfull arent they!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
vicky and Beth your both right there's nothing like the perfect dream! To dream the impossible dream. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Falling into the arms of a dream....where all is perfect and no pain ever comes in...a beautiful feeling and a beautiful weave~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
your so right butterflies don't cry you've said it perfectly such tranquility as you fall into the sweetest dream. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I love those dreams, they are so rare and so wonderful. This is so nicely written. Perfect. Sandra PS, thanks for the reply and kind words. |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Vivid description of a sweet dream for sure, and a vision of future realities! "Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind!"...Dr. Seuss |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Today is a perfect day to dream Sandra, and Toddles so filled with magic happy Halloween! To me there's nothing more magical than a dream sends you places where you would never think possible. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Loved it!!!!!!! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thanks so much Vandana, dreams are what make realities and realities are what make us dream at times sometimes unconciously we dream things that we never could imagine. |
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