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If Love |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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If Love shalt blossom in the spring like the pink petals of a dogwood tree soaring like a doves feathered wing soaring earths canvas to be free If Love shalt kiss the night with passion like the whisper of summers breeze love may be cold without compassion a turbulent ride upon the seven seas If Love shalt warm thee in mid of winter whilst flames dance in the firelight warming thee like sip of liqueur as you dream in breath of the night If Love is swept with autumn leaves it may burn thee like embers of blush a memory a butterfly doth weave painting the sky with wingspan brush If my love survives within thine heart thence thy love for me shalt never part < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When you write for the man you love you leave no doubt of the depth and sincerity of it. Lovely write and so refreshing to see happiness abounding. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Now you are reading to much into this Mark..haa...but you may think whatever your heart desires..i will never tell haa.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
a memory a butterfly doth weave painting the sky with wingspan brush Victoria, your words deliver a clear and colorful image...lovely work. Robert Joseph |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, loving, sensual, and (the guy is a fool to not be there listening to those words this very second...) Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Robert..So nice of you to say..so glad you enjoyed..  Sandra..now Sandra ..you are as bad as Mark haa...thanks hon for peeking in.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oh Victoria, This is exquisite!! Good read. Marcy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much Marcy..and for taking time to read today.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is very beautiful, Victoria "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much hon..nice to hear from you ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it a lot!!!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Victoria! This one made me *sigh*. Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ 'If Love is swept with autumn leaves it may burn thee like embers of blush a memory a butterfly doth weave painting the sky with wingspan brush If my love survives within thine heart thence thy love for me shalt never part' To find a heart within which to plant these thoughts, Ahhhhhhh ... the essence of loving would be complete. Just lovely, lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
you paint a picture of love so brilliantly with those delicate butterfly wings, colorful strokes of words that would leave Monet breathless. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Vandana..I am glad you enjoyed..and thank you so much for reading today.. Denise..my favorite grandmother haa..always nice when a poem can make you sigh isnt it.. Marge..I am always glad to hear from you..thank your for peeking in today.. Ron..Wow Monet..what a compliment..inspires me to keep writing...thank you kind sir.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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