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Child Eternity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Child Eternity Seedbed clouds above his head Like tufts of a feather bed. Leisurely pace float in grace Fill the blue above his face. Distilled in the mornings chill From drifting winds of freedoms will. Dancing o'er the country side Play hid and seek and collide. He loves the magic shapes go by The manifest of timeless sky The changing face of endless drape Sorceries continuous shape. Illusions bearing dreams in guile Misconceptions conveyed to wile. Materials to build in air Those fantasies of mental dare. The child builds forever new Eternity into view. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a beautiful view of the innocense of a child. Wonderful read from you this morning. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Illusions bearing dreams in guile Misconceptions conveyed to wile. Materials to build in air Those fantasies of mental dare. The child builds forever new Eternity into view. One of my favourite books is "the little prince" and your poem brought back memories of the book and left me the same warm innocent feeling. I think every so often we should just let our inner childs run free. Wonderful poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ohh this one is so cool... i do so love the way your poetic mind works. me thinks me needs to walk barefoot in it some time  love the wisdom and grace of this one Sy-guy later-innocence-gator jm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Nice comment, thank you. Brian, What you say leads to wonderful things. JM, Thank you cool gator. *L* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seymour.... Some of us never outgrow our wonder when we look up into the sky, and we still try to see eternity. This was a beautiful write, and I certainly enjoyed it through my child eyes!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
What a wonderful write this is....filled with innocence and purity.....Enjoyed it much...  Jenn E |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ The vastness of the sky is a canvas upon which we, as children, float our fantasies ... Beautifully painted, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful and very precious Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, Beautiful comment thank you, Jenn E, Thank you for the read and comment. Marge, Love and kisses. Elizabeth, Thank you and love Sy. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and when we grow up, we're criticized for having our heads in the clouds. Go figure. I like the way your clouds constructed this one, Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Couldn't put this to sleep with a better comment. Thank you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, I don't this is quite ready for sleeping yet, maybe it needs a companion lullaby from you. the imagery in this is amazing thank you for posting it. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- Found this back here and just had to let you know I love it. Very precious. lol @ Balladeer...how true it is.  enjoyed this much. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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