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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Awake < !signature-->sweetest sound of still slumber soft breath of vital love slender hand upon thy chest 'tis this hour, to treasure best pre-dawn light of shadows reach to outline and kiss thy expression of gentle dreams sweetly breached of angels come from heaven and lo, you stir, and wake, and sigh and catch up this angel of your eye Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-26-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
sweet dreams indeed. sweet awaking also. very nice. lyrical. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful. I know this is meant to be a romantic poem, but have to share this. I have really only felt this kind of tender sweetness, when my granddaughter sleeps with me on Friday nights.(she's 4) I lie there and look at her, and brush her tiny face with my hand. I would have written this poem for her.. Sandra |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
So serene and pleasantly comforting. Touched me so. Thanks Rich |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
This is beautiful! Unknown to you, you've penned a kodak morning I had. It happened just as you said. Sandra's comment was special & added to the beauty.  Marcy |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm sure you are the angel of his eye, Sunshine. This is beautiful.... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Truly beautiful.....it makes you feel sooooo, sooo wonderful!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
this is wonderful. I liked the imagry, peacefull and playfull at the same time... Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
the sweetest scene - even more sweetly described - well done K |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
to awaken from slumber to behold such as this is all one can ask and must be pure bliss |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sunshine, what a lovely morning it would be...charming! Robert Joseph |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* Just beautiful Karilea. . . absolutely beautiful. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ron, lyrical works, thank you... Cat, the poem is always what one feels from it...I like the sharing of your story, thank you... Rich, it's soothing to be comforted...thank you... Marcy, thank you for sharing... 'Deer...sometimes, I'm the imp, thank you!!... Peppermint, I'm glad you felt it... DK, exactly... Mr. Yeats, thank you for the sweets... Prometheus, thank you for adding that... RJ, charmed, I'm sure...thank you... Sven, now you know I like sighs, thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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