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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-10-26 04:41 PM


I---I am A B A B
You---u are C D C D
OH why---y can't we oh we
Be mo---re than ordinary friends
Is it that I---I rhyme every other line
And you---u like to rhyme at every e---nd?
is it that you are more sublime
and i just have to rhyme
is it that you are simplicity
and i am eccentricity
oh---h opposites attract
it's a scientific if not poetic fact
Is it that with you, Poe, you can't get your fill
And me i love Benny Hill
He is a poet too---o
oh why must i compete with you
just please don't think of me
as a silly poet clown posse
But then again
Please do---o
Look at me
i am a clown
and my poetry
is all for yo---u!


© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-10-26 04:47 PM


Cute! Thanks for the smile.  

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



inot2B
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2 posted 2000-10-26 06:33 PM


I always thought your writing was a bit off, but now that I know you like Benny Hill, I realize the reason why.
Thank you for this evening's entertainment.

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-10-26 08:07 PM


LOL...cute Walt!!!
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4 posted 2000-10-26 08:21 PM


Any man who likes Benny Hill is king in my book.....
Temptress
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5 posted 2000-10-26 08:35 PM


Hey, Walt!   Don't stop writing the stuff that brings a smile to my face, okay? If you do...well..I'll throw a temper tantrum...and if that doesn't work...well..I'll get back to you, okay?    
Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-10-26 08:45 PM


Smiling Walt! I liked your style in this, and hey, I can't help but love Benny Hill ... that theme music makes me smile every time. Much enjoyed this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

wayoutwalt
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7 posted 2000-10-26 10:54 PM


thank you all thaz me the biggest benny hill fan ever yuh as a kid i always preferred the cable version and thinking back yuh i still do!
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