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jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

0 posted 2000-10-26 03:29 PM

As a child it's our security
It's all we ever knew
As an adult it's our fear
Its horror is too true

It's something we all look for
Its beauty is so grand
It's torture when it turns
It does not understand

It comes to us with pleasure
It enhances our dreams
It leaves us with a void
Its unending internal screams

Without it we feel lost
It's something that we need
When we have it, it attacks
On our hearts it does feed

Once we experience it
We can never get away
We think we'll get over it
But the pain will always stay

So, is it good, or is it bad?
The answer is yes. Isn't it sad?

Love is the law, love under will.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-10-26 03:46 PM

Sad only when IT isnt true...thought provoking write here

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2000-10-26 04:21 PM

you said it all,
before you have called,
a child is a precious gift we receive,
yes they know how a heart to grief,
and they show their love with innocent kind,
and turn our heart in a forgiven mind,
but what they do, or even don't do,
our love for them is always true.
before you have called
you have named it all,

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

3 posted 2000-10-26 04:31 PM

the answer is yes...

you got it my friend! the ending on this one made me smile--you cant call it one or the other..it is what it is..and you can only take it as such..but take it!! dont be afraid of it, or you miss the good

very good write, this one ....

hugs, dg

"after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall

jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

4 posted 2000-10-27 03:41 PM

Paula
  Yes it must be true
  Not just for one but two

Charisma
  It can throw us into a terible fit
  But, for our children we always have it

dgvarner
  Yes love it or hate it
  Just remember to take it

Love is the law, love under will.

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

5 posted 2000-10-28 08:14 PM

Very deep. oh so deep. deeper than it looks.
Has lots of ummph in it. makes you really sit and wonder.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2000-10-29 09:03 PM

wow...definitely a thinker here.
i'm loving IT.

-vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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