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Awakend Strength
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Awakend Strength |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I have awakend my sense of being the one you have crapped upon My anger is my domain that source you have forgotten I do know love and it's souces of how to carress in peace Of what a sensous kiss brings to my lips following my mind That second glance of fall which accompanies my souls creation Years may sing out praise but I fold inside my own time Of waking in the morning next to the damp warthm of sex That enlightens my beat now my spirit is back |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm going to have to guess that this is for an ex-love........I'm not sure, but it sounds really cool.  -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Michael...nice to see that awakening sense of power...great write |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very passionate poem here! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very passionate poem here! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Awakening senses can be very powerful, as is this poem very powerful. This came through strongly. Well done. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
There's lots of emotion and passion and meanings in this one. each reader could interpret this to a situation of their own. I did. Very well done. |
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