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Storm of Power
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan 
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Storm of power, reflect my pain. Now that he is gone, my life will never be the same. Lightning so bright, Show not my heart. For should it be seen, it will show it's just ripped apart. Thunder sing out, tell of my loss. A story of love, of a heart that's wounded and tossed. Rain wash away, wash all my thoughts. Reminding me of, of a love that time forgot. Wind carry love, carry it far. To his tender heart, heart of life that I still hear beat. Storm of power, reflect my pain. Now that he is gone, My life will never be the same. passion is life. . . |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I get some very powerful emotions from this...a response A face reflected, for a moment, Upon my window pane. Your eyes stare back inviting, From beyond the coming rain. A whisper calls me softly, Although there is no sound, As a warm wind blows, Making dead leaves dance, Beneath the stormy clouds. The storms of love are upon us all. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love given over to time will fade as any storm eventually does and then you will see the breaking free of the silver luminance of sunshine breaking through. Wonderful piece from the heart from you...heartfelt but beautifully done. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very expressive of your heartbreak. Well done. Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The storm will soon subside my friend. . . Excellent poem from you. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
But you haven't seen the rainbow yet  "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this was beautiful yet also very sad. but where there is rain, there is also sun, and like Irish Rose said...this makes for a beautiful rainbow. take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your pain was etched clearly in every line...a powerful piece of work. Great writing~ |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Ron, yes they are my friend. Thank you. Mark, thank you. You always seem to understand. Denise, my heartbreak is very deep. Thank you. Sven, I know that they will, but when? Thank you. Irish Rose, there's a rainbow? *sigh* Aimster, I know that there will be a sun someday, just can't see it for the sun. Thank you. butterflies_dont_cry, my pain lives in my heart. Every day. Still. I hope that it will leave one day. Thank you for reading. passion is life. . . |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This certainly stirs the heartstrings... Thank the powers that be that you can feel; so much better than the heartless ones!!!! The rainbow will come...tomorrow is a better day Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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