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My Song (Trying Sunshines Challange)
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My Song (Trying Sunshines Challange) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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My Song (Trying Sunshines Challange) There is no single song So many I'd need to fit all of me Chains the first I'd choose But I've found the key So Freedom follows as I burst free Searchin next as I begin to leave But Back Home is where I'd be On Silent Wings my soul would fly A Touch Of Heaven is what I see So my song would be A celebration of all of me I may Miss You Nights But I'll Stay away to be free Now And Forever is a long time And Always I'll forever be Lost Without You and your love But Time After Time it's me Who's said How Do I Live Marsha |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very interesting..i'm taking a stab at understanding what the challenge may have been here..  (i havent actually figured out where these challenges come from yet!) '...i think i like this oh bubbly one  hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee you little devil, I was just going to sign off, It's really late here well late if I'm up again really early. So you like it huh, ahh kid if you throw your hat in the ring everyone will bow out and leave you the undisputed winner. take care Marsha   |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Don't know how I missed this one but I am so glad that I found it. Lovely response to the challenge and I would say you have a winner in it completely undisputed. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark you are much, much to kind. Actually I don't know if I got the challenge right, but I tried and that's the main thing. Thank you for reading this, take care my friend  Marsha |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, I'd say you hit the nail on the head... my challenge was to have people open up on what music does to them...what songs have touched their lives... the way they got to express it was their own challenge... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea thank you so much, it was fun and I enjoyed doing it. I thank you for stopping and reading it, and for your very kind words. Your work is a shining example, and I love it. Take care Marsha |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marsha... this 'song' escaped me the first time around, so I'm glad Mark brought it back to read. It's great, as all your works are, and I enjoyed the way the titles fit so well into your thoughts!! I wonder if the challenge is still on? Then again, as a singer, I'd have a hard time choosing!! Ha!! Great writing, my friend!!  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny why thank you, as I said the challange was fun but did I have to rack my feeble brain for this. Now you would be able to do it with one hand tied behind your back, and still create a stunner. Anyway I'm glad you stopped by because I always enjoy hearing from you Take care Marsha |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, I'm glad I found this before it disappeared. I think the challenge was well met in your poem, very well met indeed. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, now isn't that just like you, you say such nice things and I don't deserve them I really don't. But I thank you for making me think that I'm getting somewhere. I always appreciate your comments and the fact that you've taken the time to read my poem. So thank you loads Marsha |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful response to the challenge Marsha! You've not only met, but exceeded it. It's not easy to incorporate all of these songs as beautifully as you have done ... very lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Marsha - great poem. I think you approach lul Krailea's challenge from a unique viewpoint - good for you. I would love to take on this challenge, but I haven't had much success finding any songs about walking a plank and kitty cats - lol. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kit you are far to kind, I'm glad you liked it. I thank you for stopping by to read this. It was great fun, but I can't see me doing too many of these challanges. Yes Kit it is because they're hard, my brain isn't used to working you know. Anyway thanks, for your kind words, I cherish each reply because I know I don't deserve them. Your work is beautiful by the way. Take care Marsha |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
LngJhn thanks for reading this. Unique yes best way to describe me, well I better be, if there were two of me running around the world wouldn't be very safe. The queen of chaos that's me. Hey how's this for you Lngjhn, I Am The Pirate King And With Cat-Like Tread I am a Wandering where And I'm Searchin' High And Low for My Angel Of Mine I know you could do better, Take care Marsha |
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