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Where is the light
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Where is the light |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Where is the light I search within a parallel The essence of a mood. A living ringing memory bell In shadows of seclude. She visited my soul one day Invited to the core To sooth an ache I could not stay And never out the door. She since became a living spark That lights within my soul She's lit a candle in the dark That shows a living shoal. And I forever seek her out This magic of her art And fell in love there is no doubt This women in my heart. But distance fades the spectrum red And somber sorrow seeps my head. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Always enjoy reading your poems Seymour always in perfect rhythm..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This was very touching to me. Those last two lines really show some pain. Take care. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, Thank you so much for the read and comment. Sandra, Thank you for the read and warm comment. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 I will give the sun, to light her way to you...  a candle for the dark  and a torch, to kindle the flame that you have for her... nothing more than this, can I do... she's one lucky lady, Sy... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is a very tender love poem, written only as you can write. Very moving Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--I must agree with Liz, but then I usually do. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You trying to light up eternity? *L* Elizabeth, For you I can only return the rose. Love Sy Martie, And to you I send a rose too. *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Within each heart a light does glow Lit with love's refrain It always burns the brightest and leads you home again to love to love to love *You write so pretty, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Seymour, I can't help but sigh when I read this poem. Such gentleness and elegance in style of write... A delight to have read Coco |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And so do you. *L* CocoBaci, Flattery will get you everywhere. LOL |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* you expressed it so well.. with the right words... the flowing rhym.. I really loved it.. she is a lucky lady. Charisma |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey Sy beautiful but sad...very welled penned my friend ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Eternal beauty and love resting in the heart and memories in this one. Very exceptional write. |
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