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somehow, that's sublime
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somehow, that's sublime |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I want to mesmerize your mind... I want to dazzle ear with song, I want your hand in search of mine... I want you right where you belong... I want your breath so rich~~ combined~ I need. I feel the pierce of prong... I weep. I think the fault is mine. I ache. and somehow, that's sublime... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"I ache. and somehow, that's sublime." now that's some kinda passion, girl!! that's what I'M talkin' about! love it |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ Wow........this is amazing.....  -SEA |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So THAT'S where the phrase "hurts so good" came from? As always, weighty words from the serene one  |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Beautifully Written think I am feeling sleepy verrry sleepy. Your not trying hypnotism are you? Rich |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I love this one!! It sings a song of serenity...and is woven like only you can do my dear friend...yeppers I love it yes yes I do...love you too |
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StarGlow Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 40 |
senerity, girl, I'm taking notes, this is good. enjoyed. Star |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Very well said... BRAVO! [This message has been edited by Toddles (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Somehow...YOU are sublime, my friend. Your words move me.....magnificent.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
doreen---thanks lady, but it's some kind of ache too...sigh, and hugs. SEA------thank you for the amazing.. 'deer----It's a little known fact, that I invented that term...I know...should've sold t shirts or something...hugs and grins. Rich-----whatever it takes. Holly----it just slipped..smiles and hugs... Star-----love your name. Thank you. PdV------Thanks. Just knitting some "booties"---maybe a bib---hmmm...maybe just a string to tie around my finger to remind me.... and just for today...I think I'm going back to bed. Thank you, kind forum people!!! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is truly sublime...beautifully written Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You do dazzle me my dear friend, each and everyday with just the thoughts of how special you are. Your song is heard as well and it is as sweet as the lips that sing them. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Serenity,...I always enjoy the way your words speak. And YOU dazzle my ear (eye) with song,...each time I open you ya know. Take care you. *Peace. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
peppermint---(I always think schnapps after thinking that) thank you much for reading...I do appreciate it. Mark m'angelheart--thanks luvie...it doesn't get any sweeter than that! Spitfire---thank you lady...your opinion means a lot to me...I'll have to e ya some giggles later.... and Toddles--sorry for the oversight, of course, I thank you for reading. Okay, I'm awake. Be afraid world. Be very afraid....lol...and thank you all kindly. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Peppermint schnapps??? Oh!!! I get it, I get it (little slow, long, long night  laughs: It was supposed to be peppermint patty after the charlie brown character, but that was taken.....actually, I really like just Pepper or Pep...if you wish BTW, this is still simply marvelous, dahling!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
i love your thinker, love how you think and when I grown up, I wanna write just like you. Marcy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just a quick thank you to Marcy--ya made me smile...see, I'm still not sure what I want to be when I grow up---and I'm 39!!!!! Thanks for the compliment and the giggle. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
yes - it is - - 'nuff said! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
S, I want all that too, why can't we have it??? This is a flawless, perfect poem. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--Your poetry just gets better and better...I really like this! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you, Wilfred. Sandra, Hugs to you. Martie, from you, that is a hand over heart thank you...you are an awesome writer! now...off to house drudgery... PEACE, good forum people. Love to all. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
my heartis throbbing, how beautiful yor words always are a resinate in my mind. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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