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Take Me Back |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Days of wine and candles days of fantasy nights of deepest passion nights when you loved me.. So abruptly gone now faded into mist memories torment me still feel your last kiss.. I paid for them with tears special times with you cost was far too heavy left me black and blue.. Still my time machine calls longing to come home back to when your loving pushed back the alone... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
After reading this it shows that you paid a very high price to not be alone...excellent work and all my best to you~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Oh this is great, and have I been there, Mmm remember it well. Not fun, not good and not what I wanted, it takes a long time for this hurt to disappear. In the meantime, you are still writing so magnificently, and I applaud your spirit. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Catalina...A splendid write from your pen and I must say the expression tuggz at my heart Thanks for sharing once again  Coco |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Catalinamoon~ this is heartbreaking........so very sad to me...but I thought the way you penned it was excellent. -SEA |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
God that was so pretty. Thank you for your response also, I appreciate it very much Write on! BirdeeB "So don't judge me by my failures, only by my dreams" SR71 |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
your words express the pain and remorse all too well...well written Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
beautifully done...my heart is feeling it. Ron |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Since you express this so well that my heart breaks for the pain....I can only say, wonderfully written and I hope the writing excorcised some of the demon!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Another sad, but wonderful write, Sandra. I know it doesn't seem like it now, but time does bring relief. I know that. Take care, my friend. sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
"back when your loving pushed back the alone"--excellent lines! I'm glad I have such great poetry to read while I wallow in this feeling. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this sounds so familiar for me, you have penned your feelings so open and clear, feeling the price you paid. Charisma |
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