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repost, poems i posted in diff forums - its not as good as yours/just sharing |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
First of all, I think these don't belong in this forum for all the poems I've read in here simply amazes me. I just wanna share them in return for allowing me the chance to read yours. So, here's some of em: ---------------------------------------------------- Footprints in the sand... Why do I see four instead of two? Alone, left with the irony of life Faith wounded and scarred What am I to do? Troubles and Tribulations? Life's meaning is lost in dreams Begging for answers and miracles Wanting her back A fool, I am, it seems Shown the way back This is not an option to take Please listen to my prayers I'll love her forever Help me before it's too late Footprints in the sand... Still, I see four Exhausted, lost, and confused Keep searching no matter what Wanna be with her forever more ---------------------------------------------------- Why am I given this life if I only have to go thru all these pain? Seeing everything I hope for and dream of slowly fade away Overflowing distress? Total confusion? Faith to denounce? Why must Life make me hurt, bleed, and suffer everyday? A disease slowly eating thru everything that I have lived for To supposedly be kept and can never be returned till taken? So unfair and merciless that just like that, insanity fills my mind Why must I be grateful for a chance to be in a world uncertain? I bleed for all who suffers, I don't want anyone to feel the same This is unjust. Peace of mind is gone and no where to be found Where is the help I have been taught to ask and pray for? What is life's real meaning, if in shackles I am forever bound? I am tired of crying, hurting, and just plain tired of everything I have no where to hide, no one to turn to for I am full of doubt When do I heal? Time's worth is no essence to me anymore Just want to know the truth and finally realize what I'm living for ---------------------------------------------------- I love you... I love you with all my heart, my mind, my soul I'll love you even beyond Death's knock at my door Like a stream flowing from the rains of an April day A flower's blooming scene during the month of May I love you without doubt and questions asked I'll love you even after eternity's time has already passed Like horizon's gold on morning's daily gift of light Or a full moon's pride on a cloudless and starry night I love you beyond love's own unexplored definition I'll love you even thru all of love's own contradictions Like an eagle's majesty as it spreads it's wings in flight Or that of a parent's touch on their newly born child Above all... I love you for I've realized one thing to be true I'll always love you for I realized that "Love is You" I love you... ---------------------------------------------------- Footprints in the sand...? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey you...this is nice stuff. "Faith wounded and scarred What am I to do?..." "I love you beyond love's own unexplored definition..." Whaddya mean, you don't belong here? |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Open Acire!  Of course you belong! You've penned such lovely description and powerful emotions throughout these lines ... wonderful sentiments!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoriJaye Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 34Massachusetts USA |
Hmmmm...why would you feel your words don't belong here? Your words spoke to me...were true, were YOU...as any poet's express their own unique vision. I enjoyed these poems of yours very much and am glad I had the opportunity to read them...I hope to see more...please? =) LJ "A smile is when your inner beauty comes outside." |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
acire, these are beautiful poems. I have sent them to myself so I can read them again at my leisure, off line. I think we have all had doubts about our poems at some time or other. I believe all it takes to belong here is an ability to write and a love of poetry and people. I think you have filled that criteria. It is good to always want to improve, but don't let that get confused with thinking you can't write. You can! I'm DEFINITELY NOT saying you need to but if YOU think you need improvment try the workshops. I found them today and I'll be back (because I DO need help, but I'm not brave enough to go to CA). Dee [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Acire~ If we threw a pity party for poet's without a clue We'd have to leave you out for there is talent in you ! Now quit your belly-aching and hunker down and write ... We appreciate your stuff so share with us each night. Read the works of others and leave a sweet reply others will get to know you on that you can rely From each poet that I've read I've learned a thing or two ... We crank it out and share it for we're poets true-blue !  See .... you already inspired me !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I Love you for I've realized one thing to be true I'll always love you for I realized Love is you." Very nice writing...I enjoy experiencing love within relationships with others...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ummm, dittoing Marge... and a Hearty Welcome to Open! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Footprints in the sand..... I recognize this line, have a poem on my wall, with this as title..... and than I read further, captured with your love, your feelings...that you penned from your heart. you are more than welcome, and hey I am not a good writer too....wish I was....but well I have a handicap, as english isn't my native tongue...... keep on writing.....and keep on with sharing it with us. Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
acire of course you belong where else could you be with your shining examples of good poetry. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A volume a powerful sentiments, just what we thrive on at passions Welcome to the perfect place to vent your love and sorrow and joy Liz |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
acire......I agree with the others...you do belong here....wonderful work...I'll be looking for more Alan |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
acire, thank you for posting your poems, I enjoyed them! So post More............Jon |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
hey acire, I found a home here yesterday, now you can join the family. You're welcomed with open arms (and open poetry of course). Ron |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
To all that have made me feel so welcome in this forum, I would like to thank you so much. I know you're just being nice  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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