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Open Poetry #10
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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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0 posted 2000-09-25 12:49 PM

I cried when I read the words
He wrote upon the wall.
Pieces of emotion
Extending down the hall.
And the little chips of plaster
In between them all,
Did nothing
To take away their meaning.
© Copyright 2000 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-09-26 03:05 PM

Excellent! I like this..gave me an eerie feeling of being in an old empty building!  
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2000-09-26 03:08 PM

You leave his words and story to our imagination, but yet you told it all
Very well written little piece
Liz
JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
3 posted 2000-09-26 03:46 PM

I enjoyed this. The abrupt ending really works.

Joy
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