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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Days and nights across the divide Along trails and highways Through hamlets, cities Knocking on doors, empty answers Searching for a trace Needing to find a place Where you lay in wait Leaving the warm fire You could not rest Note half written Saying! I love, am gone! Many days spent searching Nights wondering Are you OK are you fine! I ain't giving up this cross Until you settle down Be it with me or someone else Mountains are not high enough For me to climb. Oceans are not large enough For me to find Your lost soul to hold When we come to meet Yet once again I will wrap you in my arms And welcome you back Once more from your pain My love for you Grows ever stronger Each time I have to search And seek your weary embrace I'll never give up on you Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Everyone needs someone who will not give up on them. That last line really got to me! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I'm with Irish Rose! That last line got me, too! Absolutely wonderful expression of loyalty and love here, Daniel! Love it!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Irish Rose, The search for a loved one, lost and confused must never cease. Thank you. Snowpants, Beautiful words, thank you so much, Big huge hugs! Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
JD-- another lovely sentiment from your heart. is a true treat to read your work m'friend. you have a wonderful way of expressing your feelings in words. a rare gift indeed. always keep searching. for we never know what lies at the next bend in the road. take care. amy |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My love for you Grows ever stronger Each time I have to search And seek your weary embrace I'll never give up on you ============================= The whole piece was wonderful, but I have to agree with the ladies when I say that the last verse and last line say so much. The eternity of a "TRUE" love. Excellent piece. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beautiful. I admire your spirit. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Aimster Mark, Serenity, You are so good to me all of you, I do not know how to thank you enough. The road to happiness is knowing the other people in your life are happy and comfortable with themselves. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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