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Back To Sleep |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Last night you woke me up Whispering sweet everything's in ~ my ear All the while nibbling …………………………………. Wrapping your arms around me ~ searching Last night you woke me up Bringing delicious sighs to my ~ mouth Then kissing them quiet Passions, brought to life ~ only by you Last night you woke me up Your hands, so warm ~ roaming Gentle touch, soft caress Over my skin~ tingling Last night you woke me up With kisses on my shoulder ~ burning Lighting a fire deep within me Anticipating where you would kiss ~ next Last night you woke me up Two hearts pounding ~ becoming one Holding me sweetly in love Guiding me effortlessly ~ back to sleep -SEA- |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Wow! - Well SEA its 1.00am in the UK and you,ve woke me up with this one  Great read Thanks Jon |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And cowboy is supposed to reply to THIS one "SAFELY"? cheeeezzzz, my friend, have a heart will ya? I am still trying to see through the steam on my eyeballs with just the thought of where that next kiss landed. And then there is the hands roaming, the nibbling, the DELICIOUS *SIGHS*, the lighting a fire DEEP within, two hearts pounding and of course just the thought of the hours upon hours of what it would take to guide you back to sleep effortlessly....whew...."NOT FAIR" my friend, not fair!!!!!!!  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL @ Mark! This was excellent SEA! What a breath-taking read this was and such a WONDERFUL way to wake up! Great visuals you've penned in this piece!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Damn girl! HOT and STEAMY! LOL I was thinking when I saw this, sleep? What's that? LOL I haven't gotten much of that and it certainly isn't because the content of this poem. LOL Damn this one was good! Wiping the screen here it's steamed up. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ This is just a WONDERFULLY written piece of sensual poetry. Teasing - pleasing - most appealing ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Gee thanks SEA, first I nod off with Bal's, then Nan makes me laugh and now you take me back in time... Take care HUGS |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jon~ was it better than an alarm clock?!  Mark~ There is no "safe" with this one babe! Kit~thank you very much Rebecca~ things will settle down soon for you sweet friend, then you'll get some "deep sleep" Marge~ thank you!! -SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RG~ opps! You snuck in there...... I hope you liked -SEA |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
SEA, it's now 1.30am, and I'm still awake I'm not wanting an alarm clock right now. If your work is going to be this hot, I will refuse to read it after I had my drinking chocolate lolSweet dreams Jon |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jon~ tell me about this drinking chocolate.......sounds good -SEA |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
SEA, all you need to know is that your poem describes a more fruitful tool for getting 'back to sleep', than sipping my drinking chocolate. So stick with it! Jon |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jon~ what I wrote of is the best way to get woke up and the BEST way to get put back to sleep.... -SEA |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sweet everything's, sweet everything's  You’re the Sea that puts waves in my bed sheets! WOW!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening SEA, What a lovely romantic writing this is. This is my first time by your place I believe, and I was duly impressed. Bill |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The enjoyment and the appreciation are sweetly evident...sleep well...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it..i almost missed it..very nice writing Sea.. a nice way of waking up indeed~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Insect~ So glad you liked this.... Bill~ I'm so glad you stopped in......I'll come find some of yours too James~ thank you Victoria~ thanks -SEA |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
SEA, what a lovely scene and a lucky girl you are to have this sensual fellow to write about so well. I hope you don't mind if I tell you that reading it brought back some delicious memories of my own (only memories though *sigh*) but oh what a feeling! Thank you. Rainydays |
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cathybohannan Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 140Paintsville,KY |
Great poem there SEA. Cathy Marie Bohannan |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rainydays~ thank you, I feel lucky....I have a wonderful husband. Cathy~ thank you for stopping in to read. -SEA |
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