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Of Fantasy And Love
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Of Fantasy And Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Fantasy And Love I watched two lovers sit and stare Their eyes spoke secrets through the air. Their minds sent signaled subtle pendings Desires, dreams and mixed up endings. These readings were so plain to see I've done the same my love and me. We spoke with gestures in our eyes And silent words of heaves and sighs. We've sent loves sensing through a rush Naughty thoughts that left a blush. Flowers through the touch of hands And smiles that said we understand. We shared two thoughts as if as one Was sure a new world had begun. But lovers live in fantasy Employ a different embassy. They glow a world of different bright A separate world of stars at night. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Isn't it simply wonderful when everything can be said without saying a word? The eyes and sighs say it all, they always have. This flows beautifully and it speaks volumns, Sy. Love it.  ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is beautiful, makes my heart hurt for a love as this ........ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
It's been a long, long time since I've seen those kinds of gestures, but you write about them beautifully Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chansondegeste, Ant that the truth, Thanks. Corazon, I empathize with you *L* Elizateth, I think it only feels that long. Love Sy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sy, just wonderful my friend. . . you always know just how to draw me in. . . Well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ How very beautiful this is ... Quite the blissful moment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- Oh to have a love like this one. This is absolutely beautiful. i love it.-vicky oh...and Marge...you just keep bumping these beauties up to the top, and i'll keep catchin' 'em. such team work...lol < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-29-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Once, long ago, I felt this same thing you describe. I often wonder what has happened to it. Powerful and beautiful writing as always. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sy...this is superb...a true pleasure to read. Hugs K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, You old romantic. Marge, Thank you. *L* Vicky, They wrote a song about that, "Some day he'll come along, the man I love." *L* Temptress, Don't worry that feeling always comes back. Severn, My pleasure and thank you. *L* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Seymour, this is so touching and a pleasure to read... Thank you PoetFriend your words just light up my screen  Dani |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sy-- beautiful! you have captured the joys of being in love with flare. this is a lovely poem! enjoyed much...take care. ~amy~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, remind me to thank those members who see I've not had a chance to read your piece and bring them back up to the top for another go-'round... I so do NOT like missing you... and this was great! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ahh..I came across this again, and enjoyed it even more than last time. Delightfully beautiful work, Sy. Consider me a fan. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
...Sy... This is wonderful, as all of your work is!! The world of lovers is so exclusive, and it always makes one wish to be a part of it. If there was only enough love to go around!!  Follow your dream! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I love the flow here. perfect rhythm. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great poem Seymour!! It's so true we are connected in the stream of life and even more so when we're lovers...I thought you presented this wonderfully and with tender passion...oh that look! it can get ya right into the old you know where sometimes.... great job!!......ethome |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yes with just a look...a touch...nothing else needed...beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Coco, Aimster, Sunshine, Temptress, Sunny1, Whisper, Ethome and Paula. The poetry slips to the back pages so fast I didn't get a chance to read all your wonderful comments. Forgive me and please except my thanks now. Love you all Sy |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh Sy this is so beautiful...and full of the reasons why your poetry has the wings that you have often spoke of...such beauty and grace this one has~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
*smooch* ain't it the truth? great writing... *sigh* er.. i mean, Sy  |
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