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Hand of Love |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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an empty soul- a lonely cry begging to be heard a hand of love reaching out in the darkness a touch... two hearts unite as one a moonlit night... a woman- a man a star... a dream come true ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A woman A man A star A dream One glance One touch One moment One kiss A woman A man A moment A love binds that bring forth beckon for breath of love love sought love found one woman one man one day one love |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so beautiful and makes you dream about how so often we need that touch of the hand reaching out and showing us how much we care. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Oh, what a touching write. And if wishing could make it so ... Boy ! did you ever inspire MarkB~ ! ! ! Enjoyed this read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- what a beautiful reply...it appears this one inspired you.  i'm very glad thank you mysweet cowboy friend. Rosebud1229- yes...touch is a powerful thing. thanks so much for reading. Marge- oh my sweet friend...your replies always make my day. wouldn't it be nice if wishing could make it so... hmmm..yes...it does appear that our cowboy was inspired by this one. ((((hugs)))) -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Vicky, hmmmmm sounds like something I'm living... very nice. Do dreams really come true..? Parker |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"an empty soul- a lonely cry begging to be heard" this should be in Webster's under the definition of a poet. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
okay I admit it...your words inspired me so how about a duet together? You up to it? If so just email with either a yes or the first verse. Thank you in advance for any consideration to my request. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh tricks ..you got 'em all goin with this one  very nice..i like this work of yours .. .. .. .. .. .. .. and mark...you go cowboy!  and parker.."she" believes in dreams..do you believe in dreams?... i love irish's response..write that down tricks! .. .. .. .. .. .. .. i want to know about your response on that duet!! do tell!!  hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vicky, This was fabulous. So sweet and tender I could almost see them in front of me. Wonderful writing my friend. Hang in there . . . dreams really do come true . . . you just have to believe.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Parker- oh yes, my friend...they do come true if you want them bad enough. so...you can relate to this, huh? lol really glad you like it. Irish Rose- OH...I LOVE THAT!! thank you so much...glad you enjoyed this. Mark- my sweet friend...a duet with you...i'd be honored. thank you so much for asking dg- lol...looks like this one got YOU going a bit too...lol. i'm glad and oh yes...i do believe in dreams love Irish Rose's response too... definitely saving that one and last but not least...oh yes...i will most definitely be doing a duet with my favorite cowboy. ((((((HUGS)))))) my friend...love you. Lone Wolf- I do believe...dreams can and do come true. thank you so much for yourkind words...they really mean alot to me. hugs to all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
So simple and yet full of expression. A very touching piece, vlraynes, and a lovely unfolding theme. ~ Beth |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Vicky, at times simplicity says it best...the brevity of this piece in no way reflects the measure of its magic! Robert Joseph |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Elizabeth- thanks so much. glad this one touched you. Robert- so glad you enjoyed this. thanks for reading. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
So simply put, but a beautiful story! I loved this one!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
vlraynes, Nice and simple, you got the message across very well. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
An empty soul longing to be heard.. the Lord hears these tender pleas. No earthly place, no earthly one, can take the place of his great love. hugs, Deb |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Am I glad I went back to read this poem. If not, it would have been a big loss in my part. How someone can come up with such sweet words amazes me. Thanks for sharing dex I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
One touch, becomes two. Two breaths, become one. One you, becomes me. One me, becomes you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
snowpants- thanks so much. really glad you enjoyed. Daniel- thank you, my friend. glad you liked it. Deb- you always have the words to give my heart peace...i love you for that. thank you so much for reading, and i'm so glad you enjoyed it. dex- i am truely flattered. thank you so much for your kind words. really glad you enjoyed this. Ron- what a beautiful poetic response. thank you so much. glad you enjoyed this one. hugs to all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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