Open Poetry #10 |
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Hand of Love |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... ![]() |
an empty soul- a lonely cry begging to be heard a hand of love reaching out in the darkness a touch... two hearts unite as one a moonlit night... a woman- a man a star... a dream come true ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A woman A man A star A dream One glance One touch One moment One kiss A woman A man A moment A love binds that bring forth beckon for breath of love love sought love found one woman one man one day one love |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so beautiful and makes you dream about how so often we need that touch of the hand reaching out and showing us how much we care. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Oh, what a touching write. And if wishing could make it so ... Boy ! did you ever inspire MarkB~ ! ! ! Enjoyed this read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- what a beautiful reply...it appears this one inspired you. ![]() i'm very glad ![]() sweet cowboy friend. ![]() Rosebud1229- yes...touch is a powerful thing. ![]() thanks so much for reading. ![]() Marge- oh my sweet friend...your replies always make my day. ![]() wouldn't it be nice if wishing could make it so... ![]() hmmm..yes...it does appear that our cowboy was inspired by this one. ![]() ((((hugs)))) -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Vicky, hmmmmm sounds like something I'm living... ![]() Parker |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"an empty soul- a lonely cry begging to be heard" this should be in Webster's under the definition of a poet. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
okay I admit it...your words inspired me so how about a duet together? You up to it? If so just email with either a yes or the first verse. ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh tricks ..you got 'em all goin with this one ![]() ![]() .. .. .. .. .. .. .. and mark...you go cowboy! ![]() and parker.."she" believes in dreams..do you believe in dreams?... ![]() i love irish's response..write that down tricks! ![]() .. .. .. .. .. .. .. i want to know about your response on that duet!! do tell!! ![]() hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vicky, This was fabulous. So sweet and tender I could almost see them in front of me. Wonderful writing my friend. Hang in there . . . dreams really do come true . . . you just have to believe. ![]() Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Parker- oh yes, my friend...they do come true if you want them bad enough. ![]() so...you can relate to this, huh? lol really glad you like it. ![]() Irish Rose- OH...I LOVE THAT!! ![]() thank you so much...glad you enjoyed this. ![]() Mark- my sweet friend...a duet with you...i'd be honored. ![]() thank you so much for asking ![]() dg- lol...looks like this one got YOU going a bit too...lol. i'm glad ![]() and oh yes...i do believe in dreams ![]() love Irish Rose's response too... definitely saving that one ![]() and last but not least...oh yes...i will most definitely be doing a duet with my favorite cowboy. ![]() ((((((HUGS)))))) my friend...love you. ![]() Lone Wolf- I do believe...dreams can and do come true. ![]() kind words...they really mean alot to me. hugs to all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
So simple and yet full of expression. A very touching piece, vlraynes, and a lovely unfolding theme. ~ Beth |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Vicky, at times simplicity says it best...the brevity of this piece in no way reflects the measure of its magic! Robert Joseph |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Elizabeth- thanks so much. ![]() glad this one touched you. ![]() Robert- so glad you enjoyed this. ![]() thanks for reading. ![]() -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
So simply put, but a beautiful story! I loved this one!! sp ![]() Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
vlraynes, Nice and simple, you got the message across very well. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
An empty soul longing to be heard.. the Lord hears these tender pleas. No earthly place, no earthly one, can take the place of his great love. hugs, Deb |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Am I glad I went back to read this poem. If not, it would have been a big loss in my part. How someone can come up with such sweet words amazes me. Thanks for sharing dex I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
One touch, becomes two. Two breaths, become one. One you, becomes me. One me, becomes you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
snowpants- thanks so much. really glad you enjoyed. ![]() Daniel- thank you, my friend. glad you liked it. ![]() Deb- you always have the words to give my heart peace...i love you for that. ![]() thank you so much for reading, and i'm so glad you enjoyed it. ![]() dex- i am truely flattered. ![]() thank you so much for your kind words. really glad you enjoyed this. ![]() Ron- what a beautiful poetic response. thank you so much. ![]() glad you enjoyed this one. ![]() hugs to all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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