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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2000-10-20 10:00 PM

                    The eyelids of the sun, awake to the dawn
                      stretching in the flower bed of the morn
                  shines upon wildflowers,as hummingbirds prance
                  on the stage of meadows, where butterflies dance
                   the eyelash of the sun, brushes upon bluegrass
                   each blade of wheat, and straw of yellow brass
                    stalks of gold corn, huddles in the breeze
                    kernels of sunshine, in a field yellow green
                  the bright eyes of the sun, sparkles upon the morn
                  softly touching the earth, another seed reborn

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

1 posted 2000-10-20 10:05 PM

Victoria~
WOW!!!
such soft beauty in this, thanks for a most visual delight

Tracie~

                    The eyelids of the sun, awake to the dawn
                      stretching in the flower bed of the morn
                  shines upon wildflowers,as hummingbirds prance
                  on the stage of meadows, where butterflies dance
                   the eyelash of the sun, brushes upon bluegrass
                   each blade of wheat, and straw of yellow brass
                    stalks of gold corn, huddles in the breeze
                    kernels of sunshine, in a field yellow green
                  the bright eyes of the sun, sparkles upon the morn
                  softly touching the earth, another seed is reborn

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

GreyMouser
Junior Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 17

2 posted 2000-10-20 10:26 PM

Would that I could awaken each morning like that V...well done
*hugs*
Mike

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2000-10-20 11:10 PM

Victoria...most lovely post...and I am certainly...undone by its beauty...

I know this wasn't meant for anyone in particular...but I still thank you for this most lovely picture of what I have experienced...now, and later...

thank you!< !signature-->

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-10-21 09:06 AM

Victoria~
This is just alive with lovely images.
Very nicely done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2000-10-21 10:21 AM

Thank you Mike, so glad you enjoyed my friend..

Thank you Traci..nice to hear from you and thank you for your kind comments..

Thank you Sunshine..well it is appropriate
for you isnt it haa..thank you for peeking in...so glad you enjoyed..

Hi Marge..thank you so much..glad you enjoyed my friend....thanks for peeking in..

and i loved your website..it is beautiful..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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