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Open Poetry #10

What Does It Mean?

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2000-10-20 03:03 PM

What Does It Mean

In whispered spaces,
   times shaded,
shadows sly,...
lurking there
   in dark of night,
in hidden gatherings, shy.

Leaves, and litter alike
   scattered, then cornered,
in hours consumed,..
in congested sky.

What does it mean,
   when your life becomes
blue,...upholstered,
and beaded, covered in
   papered pages, raw,
slipping slowly, bound in knots,
set aflame, as you witness,..
in awe?

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2000-10-20 03:27 PM

SpiteFire,
You get an extinguisher. Very strong, very to the point and very good. Sy

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-10-20 03:35 PM

I wish I knew what it means...Awesome writing, as always.
Cat..

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-10-20 05:05 PM

You are still rocking on, lady...and I wish I had the answer for you...very vivid bonfire here.

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 2000-10-20 06:37 PM

It means perhaps that it's time to re-examine it and verify that everything's in place, eh?

Remarkable phrasing of your thoughts here lady - I love the cryptic manner you present the breath of pain in a cloak of beauty.

HUGS

C

SEA