Open Poetry #10 |
My Pride |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
He came to me arms open wide-- "I love you mom" he said with pride. "and," he said, "I'm not afraid, that all my friends will know." And nothing, nothing can compare... no song as sweet, no rhyme so fair... He came to me arms open wide-- and kissed me. My, how I have grown. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Oh, how beautiful, serenity! I love it! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Awe S'en...this is so filled with a mother's love and joy...the story that you can tell in your weaves just takes my breath away...I could feel those tears as they welled in your heart...beautiful work my dear friend~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Serenity~ How sweet and how poignant. Aren't we just the luckiest ladies in the world ? Love you, sweet mom. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
... Yeah - this rocks - I love the way you've grown - and though no parent - I've seen the growth. Cool-piggies lady! C Read my Words. Read my Face. Don't just look at either. -Me- |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Serenity, Bows to you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Serenity Wonderful and loving piece, just adorable Good on ya mum Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you, thank you, I'll be bragging on my pride awhile, before I introduce you to "my joy"...grins and thanks to all, especially, thanks to Zachary. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ this hits home for me.....my son is always giving me love, and he doesn't care who sees.....he picks me flowers when he takes the garbage out. WONDERFUL POEM!! -SEA |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
lovely, serenity ... nice work, as always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well...just look at your self ... what else could they do *kisskiss* later-cool-mama-gator me |
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