Open Poetry #10 |
Swept Away |
BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
Your soft brunette hair glistens as the rays of the afternoon sun dance brilliantly throughout each and every strand. Your deep brown eyes sparkle with the intensity of a raging fire. As our eyes meet, I look deep inside and I am swept away by the tender loving heart, the pure unconditional love and the burning embers of heavenly passion locked away inside the realms of your lonely heart. I strive to find the words that unlock the secret passage, so I might experience the hidden emotions trapped within the sanctuary of your soul. Emotions waiting to burst forth, while two hearts join as one if only for a moment... in the hourglass of time. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Bama Poet~ this left me tongue tied and wishing like mad it was written for me...*SIGH*......so beautiful. -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
First I was going to be upset about SEA giving another poet a *sigh* but after reading this I have to admit...I gave one as well. Exquisite piece of poetry. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Perfect title for the feeling this piece gave me...this is beautiful~ |
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BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
Thanks everyone! This person is very special to me! "If you love someone, set them free. If they come back to you, they're yours. If not, they never were to begin with." |
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