Open Poetry #10 |
If Only |
nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
IF ONLY If only I had told you all the things I had to say I rehearsed them in my mind so many times each day. But never seemed to find the right time to say there was always something that kept getting in the way. Now it is too late you see cause you have gone away Maybe if I'd said them you'd still be here today But now you're gone and I am very lonely repeating over in my mind......IF ONLY.... nona |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nona~ this aches with regret, I know sooooo well how this feels.....I feel your anguish. -SEA BTW~ this is fantastic! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
~*BELLISIMO~* Coco BACInHUGS2U |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
sea & coco thanks so much for validating my words it is so rewarding to know that you have been able to connect with another. nona. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Thank you for reminding us to say what's on our minds before it is too late. Very good poem. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, it is so important to connect with another and have yourself validated, oh Lord, how I know this, and regret, and going back, all of that. I don't know if I've welcomed you, but welcome and I hope to read more of your words and your thoughts. Thank you for sharing them with us. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Thanks for your replies inot and Irish Rose I have seen too often people who wait too long to say what they should... hope we won't be the one's saying "if only" hoping I will get the time to share and read more of others works..I come here when I need fodder for my soul......nona |
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