Open Poetry #10 |
Lost and Found |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Lost and Found since the day that I first glanced, an image known and yet unseen I felt within what it was like to be without, without my sight My heart now rests My soul at peace, I learned to breathe To breathe you in become your own become, one need I find myself within your eyes I lose myself... within your sight Snow < !signature--> "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice." (Watercourse 3/00) [This message has been edited by Snow (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome! This is a great start, hope to read more of your poems! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Snow, this is a great first post and a most enjoyable read... I look forward to many more from you. Coco |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Snow...welcome to our world...this is lovely ... a great first write |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
enjoyed this... your writing style seems familiar... Lo que eres hable tan fuerte que no oigo lo que tu dices- |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
I find myself within your eyes I lose myself... within your sight Oh, me too...Wink! I love this! ~enb~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
welcome on passions..with this beautiful poem....looking forward for more. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Snow~ WELCOME!!! This is a wonderful first post....definately looking out for more from you! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Thank you all so much for the very warm welcome and the great comments you have given me. I look forward to reading all of you and posting more. Again... Thank you!!! Robert... ~ek Snow< !signature--> "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice (Watercourse 3/00) [This message has been edited by Snow (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
found in sight lost in love. . . wonderful Snow. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great poem! I love it!! You have a great writing style! Welcome to Passions!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
sven and sp.. thank you both very much for your replies. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. snow |
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