In Time II--(to sunny1's In Time)

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Open Poetry #10

In Time II--(to sunny1's In Time)

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

0 posted 2000-10-19 01:13 AM

                              Time was
                         Love was
                              Time passed
                         Love passed
                         living ceased

                              Love touched
                         Love took
                              Love left
                         Time stopped
                         seeing ended

                              Flowers wilt
                         Hope fades
                              Dreams die
                         Before I love again
                         so will I

thoughts as i read "In Time" by Sunny1

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-10-19 01:22 AM

This is just wonderful brown eyes...even without reading Sunnys' poem.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2000-10-19 01:31 AM

hey i like this!1 couple readings and dense me got the picture its great yuh

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2000-10-19 03:44 AM

~~~ Hi Jamie ~~~

Oh, yes......this is perfect, in thought and feeling!! It's good to see you again, my friend......and I'm honored that you used my poem for your writing!

Follow your dream!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2000-10-19 08:23 AM

As a day disappears
a new one begins
with a touch of soft rain
he drinks from it
and his dreams
will come alive
you will see
the flower wilted,
love again

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

5 posted 2000-10-19 08:55 AM

Jamie*
Wow....in this brief work you said what
would take me pages...I envy this form of
writing and you wrote like a pro...great
work~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2000-10-19 09:13 AM

Prometheus,
haven't seen you around much and I have so missed your work. This is an exceptional comeback.
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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