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I wander, wondering
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I wander, wondering |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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I wander, wondering the once happy streets of May, why do the painted broken lines no longer count? I watch them disappear from under my feet to greet me again tomorrow wondering, how memories are trapped like sands in recycled bottles, placed somewhere on a dusty shelf silenced I wander to where the fall of the sea dares to bury the sound of laughing, it dies slowly within me, the reed the weed drenched Angel of Darkness Oct 2000 < !signature--> "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree--You always color your thoughts so beautifully... I wander to where the fall of the sea dares to bury the sound of laughing, it dies slowly within me, the reed the weed drenched beautifully done! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Exception piece, Dark Angel. Felt a hollow aching in reading this one. Well done. Michael |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, excellent writing, as always, Maree! I can always feel your words! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
wondering, how memories are trapped like sands in recycled bottles, placed somewhere on a dusty shelf silenced Girl this was AWESOME! I love it, so melancholy!  HUGz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wondering and wandering. . . something I've been doing a lot of these days. . . Wonderful Maree. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
.....and the days follow behind one none different, none alike.. all the same- they too disappear........ felt this one dear.. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yes, I liked the play of wandering and wondering...a truly nice weave, and as always, a thoughtful read, Maree...you continue to impress, my sista... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
that took me on a trip liked it lots |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I am walking on that same beach with you, wandering, wondering. How very well put. This was perfect. Catalinamoon |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wonderful work, as has already been said when you write I can feel your words. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Martie thank you and you colour my days sweet one Thank you Michael Denise, thank you so much hon Glad you likd it Angel thanks for stopping by Yes, same Sven, thank you for your lovely reply whether they are the same or not dear Jamie, they all disappear, but there is always a new one Thank you my dear as long as I keep impressing ya sweet serenity, I am happy Thank you for such a lovely reply hon Walty, my buddy so, was it a nice trip? glad you liked my friend catalinamoon, thanks so much Eagleone, thank you very much for stopping by and reading and for your lovely reply < !signature-->"If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
later maree ...outta time now .....but well done anyway .....lol |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Maree...this is wonderful and I love the little play on words |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Mmy...wow... you know the bit that gets me: wondering, how memories are trapped like sands in recycled bottles, placed somewhere on a dusty shelf silenced I don't know...do you think they are really silenced? Either memories or bottles of sand. I have a bottle of sand - it holds memories too...neither of them are silent. Hugs AoL for a marvellous, soul-stirring piece. (Seriously - I need what you have - stuck in this block I am in...) K< !signature--> "He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
DA~ Exceptional writing. Once again you touch soul's...well penned Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wander to where the fall of the sea dares to bury the sound of laughing, it dies slowly within me, the reed the weed drenched ============= you write the dark side of the ache like few chick poets can ... excellent work Maree ... take care jm |
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