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devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2000-10-18 07:34 PM

I closed my eyes,
And emptied myself into your soul.
Sweet lips to skin,
Heated bodies pressed so close.

Surviving in dream,
Destined to fade of morning dew,
I give of myself,
Let me mesh into you.

Think not of tomorrow,
As you take me in your arms-
Tonight- make me feel beautiful,
Devour me with your charms.

I’ll survive if only-
For your hands upon my flesh,
Crush into me, my darlin-
Grant me this small death.

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

1 posted 2000-10-18 07:47 PM

Hi devina,

I enjoyed the read. It is a very sensual poem, but the love seems so cold.

Jon

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2000-10-18 08:35 PM

Well, it's been a long time since I've read anything from you... You certainly haven't lost your passion, that's for sure. Wonderfully done, D, though I wouldn't call anything here small. Good to see ya here.

Michael

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-10-18 08:45 PM

Devina, havent seen you for a while, welcome back! it was lovely to read you again

a passion filled poem indeed

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

4 posted 2000-10-18 10:06 PM

Devina- I liked, very passionate and sensual.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-10-18 11:00 PM

Ah to suffer that sweetest of death. . .

Wonderful. . . sweet and sensual. . .

Did I mention that it's nice to have you back here?

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-10-18 11:38 PM

small death...I like that much...but let's not analyze the reply, okay? LOL...love ya my soul sister, would love to hear from you, btw...but hey...just stick around awhile...it's good to see old friends in the forum!

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2000-10-18 11:45 PM

she's back she's back (dancing around) and with style she is back yuh yuh!

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