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Weaving A Blanket Of Warmth ( In Absentia)
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Weaving A Blanket Of Warmth ( In Absentia) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Most friends I've known are distanced now pursuing destiny. They're fondly missed and yet somehow this prospect pleases me. For closeness oft' will blind the eye that otherwise would see, intricacies of grand design lost in proximity. In solitude these wisps of thought long dormant and subdued, emerge spun crisp their fibers taut with essences imbued, of all those on this spinning wheel that n'er stray far from mind. Think not that in Absentia to you I have gone blind. A vast array of subtle hues now tint the yarns that weave their color into ev'ry line, which promted me to leave this scrap of cloth as testament to what you may not know, that bound within each filament some part of you will show. Let the warmth of fabric chosen soft caress with gentle heat. While these words stay inter-woven in an infinite repeat. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Doc~ Very cool poem.  -SEA |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hmmm... say Doc Mooose... this one reminds me of the Beatles tune "In My Life". Recently I ran into an old friend... it was nice to see him, and though I was given his number, I've no great desire to maintain that relationship today. I'd like to view him as a patch in the greater quilt of my life... not a reoccuring theme. Such are the thoughts you've brought me to with this bit from Absentia. Once again, Peace! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There have been a few poets here whose work I wish I had written due to its brilliance. This is one of them. I am at a loss for words, other than excellent! Denise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dr. Moose 1---You continue to amaze me, poem after poem...gotta admit, loved the title too...I've got a thing for warm blankets... But truly, this is quite brilliant. But ouch, you do make me think! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh sen said it but man moose i loves so much i must say you are one fine and wicked poet dude |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sea, Can't duck this one , Thank you , I am really pleased you took the time to read and reply . Doc Drew, Similar thoughts were banging around in the noggin just waiting to get out .Thanks and same to you ! Doc d, Brilliance? Darn!, now I'm really going to have to do something atrocious to deflate my ever increasing hat size. Doc serenity, Ah , but that's why we're here isn't it? Thank you so much. Wayout, Your kind words are as beer to a drunkard in the desert . Manna ( as in how manna more beers you got there bub ?)Thanks and now ,oops , hey I forgot , how can I be replying if I'm in Absentia ? Must be this darn computer thing.See Ya!!!! Doc |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 Nice write Doc Thank you for a great read Coco |
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