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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Digressions spun from some sloppy non sequitur the sour ringside pusses glide me non-stop via ups or maybe some other over-nite package mover from spurn to spurn like I'd spin my sis or spoon a nun and indulge me snoops I should be having more fun than Elvis but I'm not I'm pissed Because I didn't get the memo and missed somehow the meeting(s) (not to mention the sin) but the lies are lost on me the onus on the spinners slurs my solo sin having been the deign of a pun misconstrued and ipso facto were I slurping all these spoils by some grand design I'd plop my VIP name in the pool for November's Tuesday and count on some presidential aid page by page but who knows maybe it was just some mis-laid pronoun out there spiraling through the IRS (internet relay slander) and I admit I'm no pius son of a gelding sir and if all this golden glitter brightens up somebody's less than stellar day then I'm happy to be the poison pill and it's not like I never glossed over the sludge or polished the tarnish off my halo (has anybody seen it anywhere?) ah... what the hell? Life's short Shut up And LISP ME...  |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
Well, what do I say except that I LOVE pissed-off poetry that drips with sarcasm - you certainly have talent in that area! Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
A forum where I've been# a thing became thong the right became wrong true came the lie a dream did die If you're drunk then what am I? HUSG Ps: what's that, you want Snoops, catch!!! [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Is snoops drunk too??? lol.... HuggsZzz back Cindy... and um... thanks Azure -- do I know you from somewhere???? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
"Is snoops drunk too??? lol...." Nah, but he's dreaming cause his paws are quivering...LOL HUSG [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
I swear I didn't hide the memo....now with my mind, lately, I could have forgotten to give it to you...but really *totally innocent look* it wasn't me...I have been in my office reading philosophy all day  great poem...and hey if you are looking for cats...you can have the one my daughter forgot to take with her lol am sorry I know you are ticked, but just had to say rofg@spoon a nun..... [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you wanna be lithped? well, lithen to thith! I could thing you a thong thince a thong should be thung, but thometimes my thinging thounds like a thour tongue.... What i mean, ith it'th thorta like thinging tholo.... you'll wish thounds were tho low it'th thilent....and thooooo, if you want me to thing you a thweet little thong, jutht thit there and lithen, and try to be thtrong 'cauth you may like my thinging, I could thertainly hope, but you altho may want my lipth washed out with thoap! *wink*  suakm theriouthly though, gothip thuckth... if it'th on the internet or on the thtreet... it thcrewth with people'th heartth headth and thanity... tho... whatever it wath that got you riled, try to forget about it and chalk it up to myth-interpretation... or whatever or strobe lights or something... date it... [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
Nope, I'm the new girl, just hangin' out - pretty interesting things going on here! |
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Jhonbus Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 25Sheffield UK |
Thanks! Strange how when unhappy, others' feelings of anger seem to cheer people up (or is it just me.....)  http://www.geocities.com/i_love_you_so_much_c/ |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Read it, enjoyed it although I didn't quite understand all of it... but then maybe I'm feeling just a little to happy right now to capture the full mood of it. At least your anger is constructive... which is more than I can say for most. Wish I could write as well when such a mood strikes. ... and to Lady Peri... you're cute when you're drunk.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
NUN SPOONING? you kinky thing you...gotta love it... wath awthome... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Rebel, this piece rocks. Great expresionism..  Parker |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
RG -- keep snoops out of trouble then -- you know how he gets when he dreams...  Corazon -- now you know that I kick kitties... rofl Fair Poet Danther : yep and I'm thick and tired of people callin me a thkirt chather.... I'll have everybody know lot-th of the women I chathe wear jeanth or thorth or thometimeth thongth -- I'm not thome thallow thkirt chather... Azure -- just thought you might be an acquaintance -- you came in here posting like a veteran Jhonbus -- glad you got a smile... Thanks Andrew -- yeah -- Dor is adorable aint she? Serenity -- I have not yet begun to kink... lol...  Parker -- thank you sir... and to all... a good night.. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice warning shot across the bow, reb Have you ever imagined a world with no hypothetical situations? |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
not to make light of your pome, mr. hawke, 'cause i sure wouldn't want any people to talk, so i'll shut up and get to the point of reply -- i'm a kittycat, sir, if you want to know why! so that's why i'm here to meow and be heard -- i won't tolerate kicking from ANY big bird! so, fly over closer and threaten again and you might find ruffed feathers as your world starts to spin! you say you like kicking some kitties? oh PLEASE!  this kittycat's begging, she's down on her knees... just TRY it and hear the meow and the purr 'cause THIS cat won't stand for you ruffling fur! i'll shut up now, hawkebird, and leave you in fact... but you best stay away, to find feathers intact!! i'm hawke-eyed!!! purrrrrrfectly fine with me! meeeeeeeeeeooowwwta here! beware pandora's box... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think your halo rolled away in that long ago ring toss game and was obliterated by a passing truck. *S* (Which leaves me to wonder... just what have you been polishing since then? *EG*) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have a great command of the slow burn...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Reb, I'm not sure I got the context, but it was a fine read, I too like the "spooning a nun" as for being a skirt chaser what else would you chase? Cats maybe? Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
What's that kitty kat? How'd you find me here? not that I was Hiding mind you we Hawkes have no fear You say to tussle me mess me up rumple my feathers unsettle my stuff... the kind of thing a kitty would do to Big Bird's with a great big shoe... But kitty listen... did I say Kick??? a kitty??? I must be sick I couldn't hurt a feline fair wouldn't harm her not one hair so you must be really on some trip you been smoking more cat nip? no kicking really  that would be rude where'd you get that attitude? but try to catch me what the heck? and you'll get a big hawke peck! [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
auntie -- so that's where my halo went... damn.. um... I mean.. darn deer -- thanks -- hope I didn't hit anything out there in the water.. kethry -- I think that cat is chasing me??? lolthanks James Lee |
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