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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Would you like to spend the night? listening to the raindrops fall while the ecstasy of the rain flows with passion down the wall Would you like to spend the night? wrapped in my love so warm as the candle flickers with desire while our shadows, tremble in the storm Would you like to spend the night? in a dark wonderland while the only thing I wear is just a pearl on a strand Would you like to spend the night? under a canopy of lace on ivory sheets of satin in our silhouetted embrace A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, "Would you like to spend the night? wrapped in my love so warm as the candle flickers with desire while our shadows, tremble in the storm" You are such a romantic it shows all over this piece of magnetic power. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I think all poets all romantic's..how could they write about love?..so glad you enjoyed JD..appreciate you kind comments.  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ok Victoria, you've convinced me, I'd love to spend the night. Just give me directions.  Parker |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
With the offer being so sweetly put...my answer would have to be yes. ;0) Wonderful poem. Wonderful thoughts. I enjoyed it a lot. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh! Parker and Alan i do have a decision to make..a very hard choice haa...i will have to get back to you both later haa...  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How lovely, Victoria. If I was a man I would say yes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you CatalinaMoon..and I love that name.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it a lot!!!!!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you irish rose and vandana..im so glad you enjoyed ..appreciate your comments.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Very sensual writing Victoria this is beautiful~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you "butter flies dont cry"..im so glad you enjoyed and thank you so much for visiting tonight.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe that I would...such luscious writing...James |
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sasanka7 Junior Member
since 2010-11-17
Posts 30 |
Very nice. |
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