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Dark Angel's Prayer...(revised repost from Open #5)
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Dark Angel's Prayer...(revised repost from Open #5) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dark Angel's Prayer Spiriting above the mountains high, Singing song and prayer she flies To fight and slay all mortal gloom Dark Angels prayer, sung for two. Her golden sword in sheath by side, and Eternities Torch, she carries high. The Flame of Life, she'll pass to you to light the night of passing gloom. So hearken to her prayer of love, a Messenger of God, the lord above, and sing her gift of comfort tonight Dark Angel's Prayer a Beacon of Light. James Parker Haley (c)2000 Oct Revision (Revised: Gender change, Sorry I didn't know our Dark Angel was a woman then Inspired by the poem…. Elizabeth and Anthony by Dark Angel /pip/Forum30/HTML/001738.html [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I always enjoy your poetry James. This piece is no exception.  Marina< !signature--> It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Parker~ Hello Handsome! This is wonderful. -SEA |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, thanks just had to change the gender the way it should have been way back... SEA, hello sweet lady... Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
BTT.......this is too good and so many other great poets must have missed this first time round. I KNOW they wouldn't want to miss a superb piece of writing like this from YOU!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is beautiful, Parker! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina thanks. Martie, thank you for reading. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dark and lovely, either gender. Corinne |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Parker- Wonderful write. I like it lots. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, thank you. In this version I can visualize a beautious angel wearing black with golden wings and a golden sword.. Vicky, thank you very much. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is really nice parker..i read it both ways..either gender, your angel is beautiful.. hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
James, either gender, you have written this so beautifully. Thank you so very much "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, thank you I prefer it this way as it should have been. Dark Angel, thank you for the inspiration back then when I was just a newbie here. I ran across it and when I read it again I realized the mistake I made in the gender so thought it was about time to correct. Parker |
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