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Primal Beat
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Primal Beat |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Earthen, primal beat pounding against smoky shadows that curl softly upon dark, metallic walls. Sweat sparkles upon curves of hypnotic skin as limbs move faster almost flying through swells of endless rhythm. Lucid strands of silver-purple haze tie lazy bows through the air while the music howls from swells of soulful darkness. And the sound rages on... Raw, starkly vivid emotion throbs almost psychotically through my spirit and I know that I’m helpless to control myself as long as the primal beat commands. *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Very powerful. I have felt like this before. It is a commanding feeling. Enjoyed the read. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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OOOHHHHH Im gonna tell LOL hey now girlie girl.. im not the only one feeling "skin tight" hey I LOVE THIS... its like cajun spicey...very nicey LOL my my my ... Little Miss K, is all inspired and growing up on us.. and we wouldnt have it any other way *smile* later-feel the beat gator jm |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Temptress- It is indeed a commanding feeling, thanks for reading!  JM- LOL, yeah I'm growing up somewhat....got a ways to go yet though I think. I'm glad you liked this and glad to see you around a bit! I miss ya! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Krsta, loved this very much especially the last stanza |
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