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Until We Meet Again (farewell my heart)
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Until We Meet Again (farewell my heart) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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It's killing me to tell you good-bye To walk away with these tears in my eyes But I will remember the promise we made That in ten years we'll find each other some way This love that I feel is forever And I know someday we'll be together So, so long my heart till then Until we meet again **************************** This was written for a very special, no, the most precious angel that God has ever put on this earth. Darling, You know how I feel about you and you know the reason behind this poem. I just wanted to say that I will always love you with all that I am and all that I will ever be. I will remember our promise to each other. To find each other ten years from now to see how each other is doing, if nothing else to say "I remembered". You will carry my heart with you everywhere you go. Until we meet again... All My Love, Jeff |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so touching, Jeffrey. Beautifully expressed! Denise |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
How beautifully sad. I had planned to wait and read a little longer before posting any poetry of my own but this poem struck a chord in me. I hope you'll read about my "Long Ago Love." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so tender and sorrowful Jeffrey ... yet holds such promise and hope for the future. A lovely tribute to someone you hold dear.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Jeff, I am so very sorry to read this sad, but wonderful heartfelt piece Jeffery. it is such a shame that sometimes the sadest moments of our lives, can bring out a poet's heart and talents like at no other time. Hugs my friend......... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow. Hmm...what to say? I usually tend to babble in replies so the fact that I'm speechless should be seen as a huge compliment! This was so very heartwrenching yet powerful and beautiful all at the same time. I'm amazed at how you managed to capture such wonderfulness in such a short piece of writing. Well done. Mucho Amante ~Kay~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe.~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jeff~ this is so beautiful and yet so sad. you have done a truly wonderful job at conveying so many deep powerful emotions in this. i sit very impressed...and i realize this was straight from your heart. kudos to you for a beautiful beautiful poem!! take care. amy |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
what can I say Jeffrey this is so passionate and beautiful. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I understand, Jeff, and my thoughts are in the same place. SO hard to say goodbye, when you don't want to. Take care. Sandra / catalinamoon |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you all so much....this was very much from the heart....Life isn't always fair ya know?....guess I just learned that lesson the hard way....but as I said earlier....she will carry my heart with her always |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Not many poems actually make me feel like crying, but this certainly did. It is full of emotion and heartache. took a lot of courage to post this one, Jeffrey. Amazing to read and share your heart with millions of people. Take care of yourself.......... Kathleen |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
What a wonderful heartfelt poem....I think this one stikes a cord in everyone....Best of luck to you Jeffrey. Best |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
What a wonderful heartfelt poem....I think this one strikes a cord in everyone....Best of luck to you Jeffrey. Best |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
. [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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djjepp Junior Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 14 |
Jeffrey, This is a sad one to read. As always you did a great job expressing yourself. I can feel the love and caring that you have for the person. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs Dee font> [This message has been edited by djjepp (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
heartfelt Jeff..btw thank you for inviting me to join the poetry site but I already have three sites as it is haa..so if I decide to make another i will keep it in mind.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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