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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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So many times I want my lips Close to yours I want my eyes Close to yours I deny myself The sweet drinks The immediacy Of first-hand Knowledge And let my Fingers dance Let your eyes In mine Guide them Let your breath On mine Tell me Let them Tango Tangle In the curly Let them Waltz Synchronized Swimming In pools of desire Till your fingers Embrace them As they emulate Us On loves dance floor Winning The jitterbugging prize I love your eyes ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Bill... Not sure what to say... I'll go for "sweet..." Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Wilfred, I would go for "wow". I think if I met anyone who add would something like this as a prelude to "I love your eyes"... well I might just ask him to pick out curtains and labradors  I deny myself The sweet drinks The immediacy Of first-hand Knowledge Let them Tango Tangle In the curly ...I am a puddle in my chair. Cheers, to this gorgeous waltz of words. ~ Beth |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Better watch it Bill....... But on the other hand I don't see so well. [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And isn't it nice to look into eyes you Love...James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I've got some Tango music ready to go! This poem is very YOU I loved it Liz |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Bill, this is a romantic's song for sure, a pleasure to read! Robert Joseph |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Dale- OK -I'll accept sweet ~G~ Thanks Beth - Ok - but no ruffles - and I like Yellow Labs best - they seem to have the best dispositions and be the smartest ~G~ Thank you ~S~ Dale - I wear one set of glasses to read - another to drive - but for dancing - I get along very well without them ~G~ -Thanks for the double response LOL JML- Eyes are the windows of the soul - they say it all Thanks Liz- Your perception is always 'dead on'  thanks |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--Nothing quite so romantic as a dance with the one you love...and a tango...so seriously sensual...love it! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Maybe Ron could put a Juke Box Forum in for the music lovers, this is wonderful, so lyrical. I loved it! Kathleen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Bill...you have the eyes to go with this poem sir...lovely sensual exciting...I could spend hours in them |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Martie- It truly is a dance of love - Thank you Kathleen- sounds like a cool idea- suggest it ~S~ Thank you Paula- My eyes are currently discolored -if i'm lucky they'll return - Thanks |
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