Open Poetry #10 |
Changing Tide (Repost from 7) |
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Changing Tide Feeling the tides are changing my eyes are watchful of what is to come, in my favor or not is still to be determined, but a course has been set. Is there a master plan to all of this that we assume is in are control. Could there be entities that are endowed with powers beyond are comprehension. Some would attempt to give this idea merit in order to get relief of actions or lay blame when the end does not justify the means, we our still held accountable. I would like to think that there is some guiding force seeing us determine our paths, and praise us for our efforts. Who could answer this with any authority may he speech my direction. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I like this. Isn't it funny how we can feel change before it actually comes? |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Temptress, Thank you for your thoughts, yes it is and we think were going to be prepared and were not, thank you again. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am so glad that you reposted this piece. This is so lovely and to KNOW that there is some guiding force out there brings a big smile to me and even bigger one when I FEEL that force in me. Excellent work from you on this one. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cerenity, it is comforting to believe that there is some big force out there guiding us and watching out for us. Execellent poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mark and Brian, Thank you so much for your kind replys to this poem, I wish someone would YELL in my ear right KNOW and let me know their around, I really could use the encouragement. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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