Open Poetry #10 |
Pollinated Kisses |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sunlight kisses the lips of a new day as gardenia drifts in the wind away taste of lovers wine is in the air blending into the hue of rainbow hair glory are the ocean waves of ice blue gently breeze tickles the morning dew dancing are the dandelion wishes sparkles of pollinated kisses flower clouds bloom above the earth rainfall baptizes days rebirth strings of our hearts play a new song the art of angel wings carries on A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very beautiful, Victoria! Just lovely! Denise |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
It is rare with a poem I like that I can't pick a favorite line - this is a first! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, Your passion collides with nature once again, giving birth to yet another blossom. (no poison ivy, that's good...smile) Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Denise..nice to hear from you again today..i think you popped in for breakfast lunch and dinner now haa..you are welcome anytime.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening Victoria, Very well written and a pleasure to read. Bill |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you bill..so nice of you to say.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Robert..as long as that is all i give birth to haa....giggling here.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good evening Bill..I just came home from dinner and it is nice to see nice responses like yours waiting for me..pleased you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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