Open Poetry #10 |
survive... (white tiger haiku) |
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
strong and graceful stride pure beauty in black and white carry on...survive... ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful graphic to match your beautiful Haiku Well Done! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful graphic to match your beautiful Haiku Well Done! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love this form of expression, well done. These magnificent creatures should be protect at all costs. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ God that's gorgeous ! A plea of beauty ! Hope you put this one on your web site. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dark Angel- thank you so much for the response. glad you like this. EagleOne- i absolutely LOVE white tigers...and yes they, as well as all animals, should be protected. thanks so much for your kind words. Marge- thank you, my friend. you KNOW i love these guys. they are SO beautiful. really glad you like this. thanks for suggesting that i put this on my website...i hadn't actually thought of that yet. love and hugs to you, my friend. thank you all again, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Vicky A beautiful haiku and picture wonderful piece Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Vlraynes, this is wonderfully done! The last line strikes grandly. If I may ask, where did you get this picture? I'm in the very slow process of writing/illustrating a children's book and one character has the head of a white tiger. On that note, this is one of the most handsome representations I have seen. If you have any more pictures, or could give me your source I would be more than grateful. Thanks so much! ~ Beth |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
tracie- thanks so much for reading. glad you enjoyed. Beth- wow...thanks so much for the enthusiastic response. i'm so happy that you enjoyed this. to be honest with you, i don't remember where i originally found this picture. i just did a search on the net for white+tiger+pictures and this is one of the ones i found. i will do some research and see if i can find the site where i got it, and will let you know. thanks again...i really appreciate all your kind responses to my poems. thanks again, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Such a beautiful picture..i love the ones at the mirage in vegas..i saw the sigfried and roy show and they are gorgeous... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Vicky, this Haiku is among the most beautiful if not the most beautiful one I have ever read. The graphic is as well but even without it the words paint the vision beautifully. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Vikie, this is one of the most beautiful tigers I've ever seen and your poem perfectly matches it! Nathan |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Viki~ this haiku paints a beautiful picture on all on its own. i envy your gift to write one. for i can not. beautiful image as well. amazing creatures they are. take care. ~amy~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~V,...I found your haiku to be both beautiful and most important too. A message I feel strongly about as well. Awesome writing. Haikus are tough to capture the 'umph' of the subject at hand,...but boy you do it well. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
vlraynes, So amazingly powerful. Loved it lots. For your interest see "Home Free" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Victoris- thanks so much for reading. so glad you enjoyed. Mark- wow...thank you so much! once again, your kind words have put a huge smile on my face. your comments mean so much to me...i appreciate you. Nathan- thanks so much for the kind reply. so glad you enjoyed this. Amy- yes...they are beautiful creatures, and i absolutely LOVE them. thank you so much for the wonderful reply. glad you enjoyed. Spitfire- thank you so much for the kind response. so glad you enjoyed this, and thanks for recognizing the importance of this subject so close to my heart. Daniel- so glad you enjoyed this...and that you found it powerful. i will definitely check out 'Home Free'. thanks for the tip. ((((HUGS)))) to all of you, -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is very pretty tricks! and i love the picture..you put two beauties together wonderfully hugs, dg "Don't MAKE Me come down there." God |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- thank you, my friend. glad you enjoyed this one. these are beautiful creatures. love ya bunches, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
They are VERY beautiful animals, and you've done justice to them through your beautiful words! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
WhtDove- yes...they are beautiful creatures... i love them. thanks so much for your kind words. glad you enjoyed. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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