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Cigarettes (repost) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hello Passions, I am very sorry for what happened yesterday....I hope I can win y'll back today...if not, I'll probaly have to pack my bags and leave...sike..ha,ha! Anyways, I've posted something more tasteful and most importantly, a positve message for the kids. I was so into posting my poem that I didn't give it a second thought about it's content or the backlash I would recieve and once again, I'm sorry for my irresponsibility..damn, that's a long word! Anyways, I hope you all enjoy! Believe me, when I casually, tell you that I don't smoke because, it ain't a joke. I never gave in, to the pressures, or the pleasures, of getting high, I've never cared, or wondered why, people got high because, compared to a smoker, I save more money, which is more food, for my tummy plus, I'm more healthy. I don't care, if society, views me as a square! My motto is: Smoking cause you think it's cool, only makes you a fool! I've always been an outcast, that seperated myself, from the mass as it's my commodity, to be an oddity, and it's destiny, to just be me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Alright Nate your back in town with a good message... Smoke, smoke, smoke that cigarette. Smoke, smoke til you smoke yourself to death. See St. Peter at the golden gate you say sorry you'll have to wait. I just gotta have another cigarette.. A very old song and smoking can be very addictive and I thank God that I am not...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I dont smoke or drink..but im addicted to chocolate haa..is that ok?...cant think of anything better than that..i dont think haa..  ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
good msg nate! stick to the good msgs, they become you  (btw..i got a little "yelled at" for "encouraging" your uh...fun? yesterday!!) hugs,dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I wanna thank the three poets who took the time and energy to post...it really means a lot to me especially after what happened during my last post....once again, I wanna thank you three very much because I kinda of figured that Passions would be upset at me...especially the moderators. Nathan |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nate- Great message here. It's always important to 'be yourself'. Thanks fo sharing. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this poem is SMOKIN'!! so... you got in some trouble here on the forums, eh??? what did you post??? could i read it??? hehe... could you tell i'm having a boring day?? *grin seriously, though, good for you... about the not smoking and not getting high thing.. i'd write more but i gotta get up to fix myself a drink and i can't reach my cigarettes from here *s great message for the kids... listen to this man.... if you don't you might become ME!!! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Vicky for your wonderful post, Thank you Doreen, for your that entertaining and funny post...my poem was called Sexual Alternative and it was about me masterbating and if you wanna read my poem, it might be in the adult forum... I'm not sure if it's there but that's what a lot of people were saying where it belonged. Nathan |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I like this. It's rather good. It has a good point and you made me smile. I am addicted to writing and music, and that's about it. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Allysa, I'm addicted to writing and music too and I'm also addicted to love. Thanks for your nice post. Nathan |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hello Nate, good message this A side note about your other poem that caused a stir. In my humble opinion, I have read many poems (by several poets) in Open that, taking this forum to be what they say "Family oriented", belonged in the Adult Forum. I realize what I would allow my 10 year old to read may vastly differ from parent to parent. But like I said, it's my opinion (and not meant to cause discord) ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hey chanson, you are certainly right about that...I've also read some poems that belonged to the adult section plus, I read a poem that had a curse word in it but yet it was allowed on the board...now I know that my poem shouldn't have been on there but those adult-oriented poem and that one with the curse word should have been on there too...but what can I say...I guess some poets get special priviledges or something. Thanks again for pointing that out and thanks for your post. Peace, Nathan |
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