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Rosebud1229
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North Carolina

0 posted 2000-10-13 02:47 PM

Transfixed upon his words
that so magically draw me into
his world, magnically drawn in
transcending as a dove my mind begins
to take flight far beyond the reaches
of the worlds I shall never know
but by the beauty of his words I take flight
far beyond the rainbowed skies, such colors that radiate my heart and make it come alive with
a new meaning to the rhythm of my mind,
I acquire to become part of the words
that flow so easily upon the page
as a gentle rain taps against the rooftop
I hear the softness of each word tap upon
my soul.
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
and beauty is also in the eye of his words

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 10-13-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-10-13 03:28 PM

Wonderful weave of wonders and promise can always be spoken when placed in the mouths of the heart. Loved it.

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-10-14 12:33 PM

thank you Mark, sometimes words are so hard to express, I wanted to transcend it into heaven and beyond to make the words come to life, I'm glad you liked it.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-10-14 12:50 PM

RoseBud~
This is lovely.
I enjoyed this -

'as a gentle rain taps against the rooftop
I hear the softness of each word tap upon
my soul.'

A lovely thought.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-10-14 01:00 AM

a new meaning to the rhythm of my mind,
I acquire to become part of the words
that flow so easily upon the page
as a gentle rain taps against the rooftop
I hear the softness of each word tap upon
my soul.
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
and beauty is also in the eye of his words
===============
YES... exactly ...you have captured the captivation ...
excellent RB.. truly
take care
jm

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-10-14 01:04 AM

thanks Marge and Janet Marie, there's something about words especially from the heart that tend to draw us in.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

6 posted 2000-10-14 01:26 AM

"By the beauty of the words I take flight far beyond the rainbowed skies such colors that radiate my heart and make it come alive with A NEW MEANING TO THE RHYTHM OF MY MIND"

...Well Rose this is superb my friend the entire poem is lovely but the above quote I truly adore

Coco

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

7 posted 2000-10-15 11:26 PM

thank you so much coco sometimes poetry seems to take you far beyond your grasp of understanding and that's where I was within this poem taking flight with the dove far beyond the rainbows, such beauty is in the words when they come together, thank you so much for you sweet reply

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2000-10-16 07:02 PM

The power of the word my friend. . . drawing in not only the heart. . . but the soul. . .

Excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

9 posted 2000-10-16 10:36 PM

thank you so much Sven, the heart and soul go together so perfectly

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