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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-09-24 07:23 PM

My lips hold your kiss
upon them, so easily,
I can feel the softness
as your lips meet mine
I knew I was lost in time
with your simpliest kiss
so devine
stars lit up the sky
as you hold me near
heaven opened up
and I heard the angels sing
as we danced beneath the moon
my lips met your lips
It seemed as I were in a dream
Though I thought I was prepared
This was something that was rare
when your lips met mine.

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 09-24-2000).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2000-09-24 08:11 PM

"My lips hold your kiss
upon them so easily."
I have met women and the first time I kissed them it was like we had been kissing for a lifetime...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-09-24 08:18 PM

RoseBud~
Beautiful opening line.
Just lovely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-09-24 10:50 PM

jmlee it is so true that you can tell how a person feels from their kiss.
Marge, thank you my dear friend !

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-09-25 01:24 AM

I like taking the bottom lip and .....well never mind....you don't want to know anyway.LOL.....Just lovely in verse and flow. I love how the lips will hold certain kisses. Sort of gives you and idea of the passion within one.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-09-25 12:56 PM

ah! Watch it there cowboy!!

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Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

6 posted 2000-09-25 01:21 PM

I love them type of kisses..... the ones where you dont know who or where your are when your done.......

ahem

anyway. Nice poem.

Keith

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

7 posted 2000-09-25 01:34 PM

Me to Keith! When you see rockets varooooooom!!

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