Open Poetry #10 |
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October's Memories |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL ![]() |
Give me words, Beyond comparison, Of the trees or the wind, In October, In Autumn's colorfully warm dreams. Drizzle me with soda fizz, Like liquid electricity Music for memorable ears. I remember the times, When carefree was a constant state of mind. Drink me in the rain, Like once you did, At that small town festival, Standing there all smiles, While people darted for cover. Remember how thrilled we were, To ride in the straw together? Walking the haunted trail, So calmly While others wildly ran by, From the men with chainless chainsaws? At the fair you candied my heart, With sugary caramel. I was gooey and pliable, To your fingering awe. Give me visions once again, Of dragons and crystal balls, Suspended from my in love ears. Tonight just let me fly, Sharing spontaneous moments, In my happy thought memory. It isn't your presence, But that state of mind I crave. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Oh to relive those times again. . . Wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely! Denise |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very nice temptress...making me crave carmel right about now haa...as I sit here eating my cookies and creme granola bar haa... ![]() ~Victoria~ |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can relate. Nicely done. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Awe yes, As a kid coming home from school I'd spot those piles of leaves people had so carefully raked into mounds... and I kick my way through them watching the wind take them and twril them dancing on the wind. But I don't remember, "drizzle me with soda fizz like liquid electricity" but I think Rosemary might. ha..! dale |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, beautiful memories and a wonderful read here. Kathleen |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sven: Yes..Wouldn't it be nice to relive it? ![]() ![]() dsnyder: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Victoria: October makes me crave many things. ![]() reject: Thank you. ![]() ![]() lucky: Great memories, eh? ![]() ![]() Irish Rose: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it! ![]() |
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