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In your arms I give
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In your arms I give |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
You walked I stared wondering Was not the time My heart still thumping The tears I allowed in vain Hid not my pain Years we cared for each other Vanished in just moments Shaking, despairing I call on you For a moment, remember! I was always there for you Now I sit and wonder Where we really parted The dreams went no further If you would only return into my arms Then into yours, I would give to you As I always did, the comfort The love you so treasure and need |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It hurts to lose a love and when there are unanswered questions it makes it all that much more painful. Penned wonderfully. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Mark, Your words are very comforting. There are many questions that need answers. But the question of a lost love is more than often never answered. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such heartfelt pain within this weave of tears Daniel...excellent expression in your writing~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How could anyone refuse this? Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ Sad to lose love in any way - 'For a moment, remember!' I hope I always have the memories to treasure. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
There arent always answers...thats what hurts so bad...no reasons just endings...and how do you lose that kind of pain |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
This was very touching, I enjoyed it. Emily |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Daniel- so beautifully written and filled with sadness.  hugs to you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Butterflies, Life, is learned by such tragic events. Coping is the hardest challenge. Irish Rose, Days are of empty feelings, nights are just another branch on the tree of hope. Marge, You are such a sweet person. Love you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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