Open Poetry #10 |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
The beast endures in silent rage what binds him to the host . Combined his torments form a cage within foul portents roast , o'er fires of intense belief that yet may come the day , when bond shall burst and grant relief in flames of judgement day . On pillars of un-just treatment to raise a funeral pyre , ignited full a blaze to vent on those who've drawn his ire , Until in molten purity all wrongs are cleansed away , and beast and host together coast beyond where danger lay . |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hmmm.... pondering this one... excellent writing... but searching for the all that is there. Thinking along the lines of God and the Devil, final conflict, belief systems... Hmmm... food for thought and very taesty at that. |
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Jhonbus Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 25Sheffield UK |
Very good! That's gonna be swimming around my head all night...Dreams, here I come! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Drew, Throw in a little about man's inhumanity to himself and you've just about wrapped it up.Always good to hear from you .How's tunes? Doc Jhonbus, Thank you , and welcome to passions Doc |
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