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So There I Am
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So There I Am |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Jabberwcky- Lewis Carroll: Meaningless speech Diathesis- Towards abnormality So there I am Inheritance holds my hand A wedding band the gift. Thus the crown of horses round That brooks my eerie looks. And so my grit has turned to wit A big chide by my side I can't abide the devilment That jabberwcky's fly I am a tender soul I am Although I look rotund And I suffer from this buffer Care naught for glibers tongue. I say in re: those surf and see Eye not or judge by glance There's no normal diathesis In trancendentals dance. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 10-12-2000).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a well-written piece, you have here Seymour. I loved your creative rhyme scheme and your abstract wording...just brilliant! Nathan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lookey whos playing with his poetry  WAY COOL Sy-guy.... yes, the complex inner rhyme is very cool... very creative and as always... your command of the english language is awe inspiring.. me thinks ya have dictionary pages with your wisdom and profound pudding  later-secret-admirer-gator *winkiewinkie* shhhhh dont tell..we have the same secret jm |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, it's always a pleasure to see you round |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nate, Very nice comment, thank you. JM, Thank you winkiewinkie, *L* Balladeer, Your very punny. Thanks for the read. |
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